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Early morning. I head toward the walking trails near my home. The air moves around me in blossoming brilliant arcs within the sun rays of a new day. My soul takes on a lightness, a will to float and play upon the clouds. I pass a group of children who come into the newly lit day as bright and buoyant as any bird who plays for the love of fun. They are frolicking about their front yards. I see a toddler, probably about three years old. Around his shoulders is his baby quilt, worn as a cape might be, as if all those cozy memories of him and his mother have given him superpowers. His eyes shine like pebbles washed by the ocean waves, and his smile ignites inner laughter. A young girl stands perfectly still, her eyes following a bird in flight. She watches as children do, with that look of love and awe. Her eyes stay with the bird, the beating wings capturing her mind in the most calming of ways, the same way soft waves on a beach do. Another child shatters the peace, running and screaming with delight. He whoops into the dew misted air. Kids’ heads turn; a dog barks; a duck skitters out further into the pond. Joy, that quiet form of contentment, fills my heart as
I remember how I felt as a child. within each of us is that child who once looked at the world with wonderous joy

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Date: 11/14/2023 3:45:00 AM
Sara Sara Sara. This is marvelous because I would rather live in the world of a child than some days with adult stresses and the world we are all living in now throughout the world. We can learn so much from children and their perspective and purity. Yes, I stand with them. Be proud of your execution and message too. Have a beautiful morning and day. May it be filled with everything good. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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Date: 11/14/2023 4:14:00 AM
ahhh, Lisa, your comments truly lifted my spirits this morning. I agree. We can learn so much about the spontaneity of children who live in the pure moments. Well said. Thank you for your kind words about the message and execution. Have a blessed day, smiles & hugs, Sara
Date: 11/4/2023 7:17:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant and true. Love this. A fave. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/14/2023 4:12:00 AM
thank you, Ms. Gina, for your kind words and for faving this poem. Your visits mean a lot to me! Have a blessed day, Sara
Date: 11/4/2023 12:05:00 AM
Joyous memories are not to be forgotten. Your prose is superb as is your poem. The innocence of children is to be admired. Blessings.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/4/2023 4:29:00 AM
thanks for your kind words, Victor. I'm always grateful for your visits and uplifting comments. Have a blessed day, Sara
Date: 11/3/2023 1:21:00 PM
I love how you captured the scene of a joys day for children. Children a joy to watch, they have no fears and are oblivious to the world.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/3/2023 1:35:00 PM
thanks for your kind words, Eve. I agree...children are joyous, tiny humans and a delight to watch. Thanks for stopping by. Enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 11/3/2023 12:30:00 PM
Nice to keep the child that bubbles within us, isn’t it? A fine write, my friend, Pangie xx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/3/2023 1:36:00 PM
I agree with you, Pangie. Hubby Bill helps spark the 'inner child' in both of us. He can be bubbly and mischievous :-) Thanks for stopping by, Sara
Date: 11/3/2023 11:06:00 AM
" I pass a group of children who come into the newly lit day as bright and buoyant as any bird who plays for the love of fun." -- "His eyes shine like pebbles washed by the ocean waves" -- Lovely writing! Indeed, when seeing the world through the eyes of a child.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/3/2023 1:38:00 PM
thanks for your visit, Joe. I'm grateful you enjoyed my poem. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. Have a splendid day, Sara
Date: 11/3/2023 9:27:00 AM
A tapestry of tender childhood memories and the ethereal embrace of a glorious morning meet the reader's senses as they set out on a peaceful walk. Dear Sara The literary aficionado will undoubtedly be pleased by such a treat.
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Date: 11/3/2023 1:44:00 PM
thank you, dearest Sotto, for your poetic and mindful comments. I'm glad readers are able to walk alongside me. I walk every morning and see some of the most delightful things. Once cold winter arrives, I won't be able to...sigh. I'm deeply grateful that the 'literary aficionado' will be pleased with my poem. That comment brought a smile to my face and joy to my heart. As always, thanks for stopping by and for your outstanding comments.
Date: 11/3/2023 6:02:00 AM
A pleasure to read this. The reader takes a walk, seeing what you see: adorable imagery of children and a beautiful morning.
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