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Winter Storm

The sun is obscured by mounds of clouds. Cold descends, snow is frozen hard forming ice. Daggers of chill cut through every sinew. Blizzards sweep past, heaping fluffy snow into piles. Monster Winter has taken hold of the whole world. Every hill and mount overcast in chalky white. Naked trees have covered themselves in shrouds of snow. Chill comes shuffling through every crack and opening, Sending shivers down the spine and all through the body. Once a rapid river, now caught in a blizzard, lies frozen. Howling wind sweeps past in deadening sound, Hurling snow all around in torrential downpour. Visible are the snowstorms that rage and pass, Leaving their trail of loss and misery. But who can see the blizzards sweeping within, Cutting deep ravines through the spirit! Dec.30. 2023 ~ placed Eighth in Brian Strand's Second Chance Poetry Contest. Winter Storm Poetry Contest Sponsor- Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 1/19/2023 6:46:00 AM
Chilling Valsa. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 1/18/2023 8:11:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. Your "Winter Storm" is a lovely story/write. I can see it. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 1/1/2023 1:52:00 PM
Yes, the storms that rage within go unseen but as surely as life's storms leave their mark so do those inward struggles. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Sara
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Date: 12/30/2022 10:56:00 PM
Your imagery is impeccable. Great description.
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Date: 12/30/2022 5:30:00 AM
Frozen rivers, barren trees--many facets of winter. Wonderful imagery, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 12/30/2022 3:29:00 AM
wow those last two lines cinches it for me, But who can see the blizzards sweeping within, Cutting deep ravines through the spirit! who knew you were talking about more than one storm, your pen bleeds ink blood and snow, winning wishes dear heart, love and prayers, and friendship gifts of valor :)
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