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Winter crept in secretly with a smile upon her face, dressing every garden in a gown of icy white lace. YOUR BEST RHYMING COUPLET #3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by L Milton Hankins 10/07/21

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 12/13/2021 5:11:00 PM

Ice , Ice Baby Jan A face laced with a smile upon it. From reading this snow white fairytale

Poet Tellaferro

Date: 10/26/2021 1:51:00 PM

Sweet, simple beautiful if imagery! Best yet! Congrats on i!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/24/2021 12:41:00 AM

This is excellent, Jan! Congratulations on placing first!!! ~ Regards & Hugs // paul

Edward Ebbs

Date: 10/22/2021 9:54:00 AM

Congrats Kiddo, "a gown of icy white lace." Nice :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/20/2021 10:17:00 PM

Wow! Awesome write, Jan:) congratulations on your trophy win:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/20/2021 4:46:00 PM

awesome, Jan. BIG congrats.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2021 10:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a "Beautiful" write and picture. I love this one. Have a blessed autumn day.......

Jan Allison
Date: 10/20/2021 8:44:00 AM

Thanks Paula:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/18/2021 5:32:00 PM

Dear Jan, your winter couplet is exquisite. So enchanting. Congratulations for your excellent trophy win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jan Allison
Date: 10/20/2021 8:43:00 AM

Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/18/2021 1:41:00 PM

A lovely couplet, Jan. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Hugs, Evelyn :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/20/2021 8:43:00 AM

Thanks Evelyn:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/18/2021 9:35:00 AM

Much exuberance in these splendid poetic lines--wonderfully expressive, poem Jan. BIG congrats on you trophy win.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2021 12:37:00 PM

Thanks Vijay-) hugs Jan xx

Francis J Grasso

Date: 10/18/2021 8:18:00 AM

Congratulations on this Top Honors win, Jan! Beautifully penned lines! ...Fran

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2021 12:37:00 PM

Thanks Francis:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Peck

Date: 10/18/2021 8:00:00 AM

Your poem is beautiful, Jan. Congratulations on your top win!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2021 12:36:00 PM

Thanks Ann:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 10/18/2021 7:39:00 AM

EXCELLENT......I love walking in the first snow....WAY TO GO.....

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2021 12:36:00 PM

Thanks John I love to see the footprints in the snow especially animal tracks:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/18/2021 7:01:00 AM

Beautiful, Jan ~ congrats on your much deserved top win.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2021 12:35:00 PM

Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 10/18/2021 7:01:00 AM

Jan, this is fantastic, I see why you placed first ! Congratulations! Blessings, Paulette

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2021 12:35:00 PM

Thanks Paulette:-) hugs Jan xx

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/18/2021 5:28:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me vividly, though virtually behold and vicariously experience Winter in my "winterless" country. God bless you.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2021 12:35:00 PM

Thanks so much Beata I am not a great lover of snow now I'm older, but its fun for the children:-) hugs Jan xx

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 10/17/2021 11:47:00 PM

Hi Jan Congrats on your top win!! It is the part of winter we all like! great image!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2021 12:34:00 PM

Thanks Krish:-) hugs Jan xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/17/2021 11:45:00 PM

Wow! such beautiful poetic lines! Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2021 12:34:00 PM

Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/17/2021 8:11:00 PM

Hey, Jan, congratulations on your trophy winning poem in my contest. You earned this with an exquisitely-written couplet, and I'm delighted to see it here at the top. I didn't see the illustration at the time of judging, but it works perfectly, too.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/18/2021 1:39:00 PM

Aw, Jan, we've always known that!!!!!! Write on!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2021 12:33:00 PM

I am SO thrilled to get a trophy for this poem, proof there is more to me than just a poop poet!:-) hugs Jan xx