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No one wants to be left on the shelf for years Guess you could say I’ve popped my cork Now I’m fully mature with a rich full body I could be described as a little fruity with a hint of spice Please don’t keep me bottled up Just give me time to breathe Contest :- A wine Connoisseur Sponsor: Chase Trevi 08~14~15

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Date: 10/10/2015 3:07:00 PM
I'm laughing now, your next poem was about wine, so chuckling...... I feel like a Seer, haha - let all leave your corkage alone // hugs / James xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2015 4:09:00 PM
ha ha ha I just thought the same thing after your comment about wine lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/13/2015 9:53:00 PM
Jan, Congrats on your tasty win. SKAT
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Date: 9/14/2015 12:46:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/13/2015 7:38:00 AM
Congrats Jan! I think you have so many wins be ause you are no bottled up! Love Balveen
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Date: 9/13/2015 7:39:00 AM
lol I have my fair of N/A's too lol :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/12/2015 3:44:00 PM
Jan, l had a feeling this was a winner. Congratulations on your awesome win:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/12/2015 4:06:00 PM
Many thanks Alexis I was delighted to place - it is the first contest of Chase's that I have entered:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/11/2015 4:44:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Jan...hugs
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Date: 9/11/2015 5:01:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/11/2015 11:55:00 AM
Beautifully composed poem with great ideas...Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 9/11/2015 1:44:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Bobby:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/11/2015 11:51:00 AM
I love your humorous approach Jan! Congrats.
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Date: 9/11/2015 1:44:00 PM
Thanks Richard I try and write with humour whenever I can:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/11/2015 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations....You did it again!
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Date: 9/11/2015 9:51:00 AM
Thanks as ever for your support Judy:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/11/2015 8:11:00 AM
Hi JAN: You popped the cork and won!
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Date: 9/11/2015 9:27:00 AM
LOL :-) Thanks Ralph:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/10/2015 10:40:00 PM
Exquisite write Jan! Congrats on a wonderful win!
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Date: 9/11/2015 2:47:00 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/10/2015 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations Jan. For a nice win.
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Date: 9/11/2015 2:47:00 AM
Thanks Michael:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/10/2015 9:01:00 PM
awesome win, my friend. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/11/2015 2:47:00 AM
Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/10/2015 7:10:00 PM
Thank you Jan. CHASE
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Date: 9/11/2015 2:46:00 AM
Thanks for a great contest Chase:-) hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/10/2015 8:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Date: 8/22/2015 3:47:00 AM
Brillliant, love this! Well done and congrats on POTD :) , warm regards, Laura.
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Date: 8/22/2015 4:08:00 AM
Thanks Laura I do appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/17/2015 10:22:00 AM
Just noticed that this poem deserves congratulations on being chosen POTD!! Well done Jan:) hugs // paul
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Date: 8/17/2015 12:01:00 PM
Many thanks Paul i was delighted:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/16/2015 7:45:00 PM
Hey Jan, did I tell you? I did my wine poem and I did it in my Andaree form so I will have an example when I sponsor that contest next time. I'm so happy. He might not place me but oh well, at least I got my model poem out of it!! a second Andaree!
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Date: 8/17/2015 2:32:00 AM
Great Andrea I can't wait to see it:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/16/2015 6:44:00 PM
Ha ha, it seems you are perfectly aged. Congratulations on your POTD!
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Date: 8/17/2015 2:31:00 AM
ha ha ha cheers Richard:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/16/2015 6:41:00 PM
ROFL, so amusing, Jan and sogracefully written!
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Date: 8/17/2015 2:31:00 AM
Thanks Thomas:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/16/2015 4:38:00 PM
I wish you well in the contest. When I was in Israel I went to a wine tasting and enjoyed it. Interesting metaphor here as well. Peace &Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/16/2015 4:46:00 PM
Thanks Matthew - I rarely drink alcohol these days - prefer my cup of tea. Hope you had a wonderful time when you were in Israel:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/16/2015 4:35:00 PM
Hello Jan, Many congratulations on POTD!! This is marvelous write. Best of Luck in the contest. I think you may have the winner here. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 8/16/2015 4:37:00 PM
Thanks Gary - it is my first attempt at a poem for a contest sponsored by Chase - I do hope he likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/16/2015 1:35:00 PM
Oh JAN....this is awesome. It deserves to win BIG. congrats, sweetie....hugs
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Date: 8/16/2015 1:38:00 PM
Thanks Eileen I am so glad you like it - I hope it appeals to Chase:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/16/2015 1:14:00 PM
Much congratulations on this sparkling piece being selected for POTD! Very clever, lovely, and effervescent, this is a winner by any measure! Pandita
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Date: 8/16/2015 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Pandita - it is the first time I have entered one of Chase's contests - I hope he likes it but I had fun writing it and to get poem of the day is a lovely honour:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/16/2015 12:23:00 PM
Beautiful ly penned. This is surely a winner. Congrats on your poem bn POTD.
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Date: 8/16/2015 12:27:00 PM
Thanks so much Olusegun:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/16/2015 12:02:00 PM
woohoo congrats Jan on POTD
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Date: 8/16/2015 12:05:00 PM
Thanks Tim I was delighted:-) I will send the poem to Darren in my next letter to him - he always used to say to me how proud he was of my progress - this will make him smile:-) I'm hoping in time he will be back commenting on our jadazzle poems, but regaining his health is far more important than that:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/16/2015 10:09:00 AM
I love your personification Jan, a 7 and congratulations on poem of the day. Hugs Eve
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2015 10:13:00 AM
Thanks Eve it was a lovely surprise:-) hugs Jan xx
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