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Winds of Change

Straight out of my dreams and into my heart Love came stepping in from out of the blue Life changing in many ways from the start A spark struck between two that grew and grew. Happy were the days and tender the nights On a bed of roses we both would lay Loving and snuggling each other so tight "In the arms of an angel" we would say. What happened to exquisite joy we’d share Magic moments that became far and few Happiness turned into woes of despair As the winds of change blew love out of view. Love is a montage of mystical things It's magic that’s played upon the heart's strings. * * 25th November 2020 Winds of change - Sonnet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 11/30/2020 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Belle! Linda
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/30/2020 9:44:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda, I’m really chuffed... Belle
Date: 11/29/2020 1:27:00 PM
Belle, congratulations on your win! Your final couplet is a wonderful and very creative wisdom. Love your use of words. Blessings!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/29/2020 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Sam very much indeed. Blessings wished in return to you... Belle
Date: 11/28/2020 11:44:00 PM
Belle, I so enjoyed reading your romantic and thought-provoking sonnet of love coming in and going out. It is indeed magical, and a montage of mystical things. Well done, congrats on your win ~ John
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/29/2020 2:21:00 AM
Thank you John, I enjoyed reading your winnings entry too... Belle
Date: 11/28/2020 10:04:00 PM
Hi Belle, You've penned such a well-written piece about love and how it can change. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/29/2020 2:20:00 AM
Thank you Alexis, congratulations on your win too... Belle
Date: 11/28/2020 7:39:00 PM
An excellent sonnet, congrats Belle on another win!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/29/2020 2:18:00 AM
Thank you John, it was a pleasure to enter the contest and a joy to have a winning placement... Belle
Date: 11/27/2020 8:13:00 PM
Wonderful write Belle
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/28/2020 1:36:00 AM
Thank you Joseph, very much indeed... Belle
Date: 11/26/2020 10:16:00 PM
Wow, so lovely dear Belle. Best wishes on the contest.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/27/2020 1:10:00 AM
Thank you JCB, we’ll see how the wind blows... Belle
Date: 11/26/2020 7:15:00 PM
A beautifully sonnet over life's winds of change, Belle!!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/27/2020 1:08:00 AM
Thank you very much Newton, so kind... Belle
Date: 11/26/2020 7:00:00 AM
A beautiful write, dear friend. I love it. You express this amazingly ... God bless you always and Happy Thanksgiving today
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/26/2020 11:18:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words my friend. Have a happy Thanksgiving and God bless you forever too... Belle
Date: 11/26/2020 2:13:00 AM
Belle. I love this so much. wow. So romantic. A favorite. vert well done my friend. stay safe. fantastic.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/26/2020 3:25:00 AM
Thank you very much Peter, that’s so kind of you.. Keep safe and well too... Belle
Date: 11/25/2020 10:46:00 AM
Waking up can be hard to do! Aloha! Rico
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/25/2020 11:28:00 AM
Aloha Rico, I presume you mean making up is hard to do... thank you Belle
Date: 11/25/2020 4:38:00 AM
Love is a montage of mystical things It's magic that’s played upon the heart's strings... Beautiful last couplet and so true also.. A well structured sonnet my friend..
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/25/2020 9:37:00 AM
Thank you for that Silent One, pleased that you like the couplet my friend... Belle

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