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Winds of Change

Winds of change are blowing, Tension fills the air. Fear comes from the unknowing, Tempers are quick to flair. Tension fills the air, Condemnation without proof. Tempers are quick to flair, Misinformation proclaimed as truth. Condemnation without proof, A cauldron of boiling hate. Misinformation proclaimed as truth, What will be our fate? A cauldron of boiling hate- Fear comes from the unknowing. What will be our fate? Winds of change are blowing. Kim Merryman 9/13/20 Pantoum

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Date: 3/30/2021 3:29:00 AM
Terrific pantoum! "A cauldron of boiling hate-" So sad; we never had this before!
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Date: 3/17/2021 12:08:00 PM
I like this poem and yes the wind of change is blowing and where we end up who will know. Leaves us with lots of thoughts on this well written piece. love phyl
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/20/2021 4:18:00 PM
Thank you, Phyllis!
Date: 2/10/2021 7:21:00 AM
Nice descriptiveness and rhyming. A fine example of a quality pantoum.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/16/2021 3:25:00 PM
Hi, Robert! I haven't been around in awhile, but I noticed you had left me a comment on this poem and I wanted to say "Thank you"!
Date: 1/26/2021 4:33:00 AM
Condemnation without proof - should be the motto in Washington DC. Misinformation desperately needs to be changed. Strangely enough, Kim wrote this before the banning of people's accounts on Twitter and social media. Thanks for sharing your vision, Kim.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/16/2021 3:24:00 PM
Hi, Reason! I haven't been around for awhile but I just noticed you had left a comment on my poem and wanted to say "Thank you"!
Date: 11/19/2020 7:51:00 AM
- We all long for a change ... a lovely poem, Kim - Hope all is well with you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/19/2020 6:50:00 AM
Let hope change does come, lets hope there are no barriers to it...
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Date: 11/18/2020 6:47:00 PM
Marvelous pantomime Kim. They take a lot of work, however this seems to flow effortlessly.
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Date: 1/26/2021 4:35:00 AM
I would agree, Kim's pantoum has a seamless flow.