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Will You Be My Valentine

Turn your head oh so slightly and step into me lightly. My heart is pounding, and I'm wondering, are you going to be mine, darling? I'm not yet willing to let you go, as I draw a breath and release a flutter of butterflies within me. My knees grow week, just to say in a million different ways, "I love you." Will You Be My Valentine 12/18/2022 Valentine Gift Card Creation Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Bobby May

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Date: 1/7/2023 9:43:00 PM
Back to your Valentine poem with Congratulations on your well deserved win, dear Eve.
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Date: 1/7/2023 3:03:00 PM
You said it in the most beautiful way Eve, congrats on your win, this is both tender and loving,
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Date: 1/6/2023 9:00:00 PM
Such a very sweet and lovely Valentines card my dear friend Eve. I love it and enjoyed reading. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. Hugs
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Date: 1/6/2023 8:26:00 PM
Pain of passionate love is beautifully depicted. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/6/2023 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful Valentine's Day Card for your love. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 12/31/2022 9:10:00 AM
Love and longing is thread throughout your wonderful poem Evie my friend in fact it is riveting ''Im not yet willing to let you go ...........................to.............. I love you''. HAPPY NEW YEAR! Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 12/27/2022 10:00:00 AM
Wonderful Valentine writing, Eve
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Date: 12/24/2022 9:28:00 AM
Lovely, Eve, as you are. Merry Christmas 12/25… Pangie xx
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Date: 12/24/2022 5:45:00 AM
Aww…so aweet, butterflies and all!
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Date: 12/23/2022 8:42:00 PM
This is so ideal for a Valentine card. Greatly enjoyed your passionate appeal... Who can reject it! All the Best ! Wish you a Merry Christmas, Eve !
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Date: 12/21/2022 12:18:00 PM
Eve, your poem is beautiful and full of love, best of luck, blessings
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Date: 12/19/2022 9:30:00 AM
Eve, well finally!! A Valentine’s Day sentiment that is neither sentimental, nor trite. I agree with your description of how love feels! Love this loving poem! Have a glorious Christmas! sally p.s. see UR week = weak
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Date: 12/19/2022 2:13:00 AM
Cute poem Eve. Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/18/2022 7:56:00 PM
Super-sweet, Eve. Gift-wrapped special. Niiiiiiiice! Season's best, Gershon
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Date: 12/18/2022 11:26:00 AM
- A lovely Valentine card, Eve - Luck in the contest :) - hugs
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