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Will Darkness Ever Fade and Light Be Shown

Will Darkness Ever Fade And Light Be Shown In a pool, water stagnate and slime-green thick ooze that burrows into open sores. Longing for the calm of my farm-day teens when great adversity was simple chores. Now as my feet refuse me to wade out I fight to keep my aching head afloat Silent screams echoes are my only shouts I watch as this blackened world laugh and gloats Night falls, slippery creatures come to play such depth and pain in every deep bite Were I a far better soul I would pray for mercy and help in this endless fight Murky waters, slow ripples, time unknown Can such darkness ever fade and light be shown? Robert J. Lindley, 6-22-2017 Sonnet, (Dark the bridge over endless canyons)

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Date: 6/24/2017 6:26:00 AM
Good Morning Robert. Yes you do express darkness and the negative. To answer the question may the light and positive appear. Your words are vivid and clear with imagery. This entry is well done entirely and very solid. Have a wonderful morning.
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Date: 6/23/2017 2:26:00 PM
We all have our swamps to drain, some need help to do it, well done Robert.
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Date: 6/22/2017 9:53:00 PM
A profound sonnet dear Robert accentuating the struggle of people caught in the quagmire of illusion and slimy creatures ready to pull one down. If they only knew they could rise above the fear which - an invisible threshold that once crossed they will look back and say 'is that all that was' – Renewed with vigor they will laugh fearlessly at the past negativity they have been subjected to. Congrats on a powerfully description of human conditioned insecurities Rob...Maria
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Date: 6/22/2017 9:11:00 PM
I like this sonnet very much, Robert! I also grew up on a farm and have very fond memories of those days! Nicely done
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