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Wild Country

The opaque mist hangs buoyant; taut, a stubble veil infects an ancient craggy face, and currents of blooming heather lay nonchalant along the old Roman road. Here I stand in retrospect motionless as the frigid sun begins to blend, a place where one should feel privileged to negotiate the freezing wind, this place surely in need of a friend where tussock stand rigid still! My footprint etched upon its soul before each blade of grass appears to acknowledge, this confined partisan role. © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Date: 5/15/2020 2:54:00 PM
Hello Harry Horseman, A very haunting tale. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 4/23/2020 8:27:00 PM
thanks for all your marvelous recent comments to me too. I need to hurry and finish here and am still a day behind on my inbox comments. OY VEY!!!
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Date: 4/23/2020 8:26:00 PM
hey you should put this in the Wild contest, harry, I went and found a limerick i did for a contest of yours years ago. Where I had to use 5 W words. Do you recall doing that contest? I don't think I won but I don't know if it ever got judged. I threw it into wild contest. I might actually win with him finally. one never knows
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Date: 4/23/2020 5:16:00 AM
Hi Harry, That is so beautiful, almost haunting, look after yourself, Frances
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Date: 4/23/2020 1:27:00 AM
You write equally well in every form you post Harry....now that takes talent and you have it in spades! I enjoyed this remarkable piece. Keep safe. xxoo
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Date: 4/19/2020 12:49:00 AM
Hello Harry, just dropping by to check up on you. Thank you for reading all my old ones (that's your favorites) I am doing good and how are you keeping up? How you been? Ps:enjoyed reading you again this morning
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Date: 4/17/2020 7:18:00 PM
Hello Harry … your verse reflects so much the high country in mid autumn with the rugged mountains and high grassy plains. Thank you Harry; your poem is great - Lindsay
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Date: 4/16/2020 2:13:00 AM
I couldn't help revisiting this beautiful gem.
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Date: 4/16/2020 1:56:00 AM
Beautiful, Harry. loved this descriptive piece and the words you choose to create it. Thanks for your visit tio my latest poem. It was exaggerated for fun. Just felt inspired... that's all. Hugs
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Date: 4/15/2020 11:31:00 PM
I love the imagery and title of this beautiful poem about a wild and beautiful place. Best of wishes. :=)
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Date: 4/15/2020 6:32:00 PM
Wonderful penning. I like this kind of poetry. Stay safe!
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Date: 4/15/2020 9:12:00 AM
Good morning. I enjoyed giving this another read. Thanks for your visit Harry.
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Date: 4/14/2020 10:20:00 PM
You have a way of ratcheting it up a notch you know that Harry Horsman? I'm glad poetry isn't graded, much less on a curve. Well written prose none the less. -Richard
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Date: 4/14/2020 6:01:00 PM
Where is this place, Harry? I painted it in my mind...
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Date: 4/14/2020 5:38:00 AM
Love this Harry. I love the wild country too. I hate living in the city surrounded by wall to wall concrete and traffic. This has great expression and imagery. Good job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/13/2020 5:34:00 PM
thanks for visiting several of my poems the other day, harry. I hope you are doing ok despite the strange days we are all encountering. Let me revisit one of my faves for YOU.
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Date: 4/13/2020 2:24:00 PM
Your carefully selected words describe this "Wild Country" poem so perfectly Harry - Is this in England, anywhere near Yorkshire, way out in the country? I love your poem! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/13/2020 7:46:00 PM
Romalds Moor, the very heart of Yorkshire
Date: 4/13/2020 11:39:00 AM
You are truly amazing Harry. I admire your brushtrokes with words. Each day we have on earth is like no other, is it? Nor was it meant to be, Rachel moment we are in a state of flux. Thank you. FAVINg this. Panagiota xx
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Date: 4/13/2020 9:33:00 AM
You have a way with words. Impressed once again. Thanks for visiting Harry. Happy Easter.
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Date: 4/13/2020 9:27:00 AM
Hi Harry, such an excellent poetic gem from your golden pen. Love the content and the wild imagery. Your image is given such life. A fav. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 4/12/2020 8:47:00 PM
I can tell you still feel it cold...Nice poetry my friend...Happy Easter to you and yours
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Date: 4/12/2020 5:33:00 PM
Amazing imagery, Harry. Very well done, my friend. Happy Easter (an Easter unlike any other we have ever had)
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Date: 4/12/2020 1:43:00 PM
Love the way you displayed this beautiful deep poem. Good luck in the contest, Harry. Have a wonderful Happy Easter to you and your family. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/12/2020 1:10:00 PM
- ... "a place where one should feel privileged to negotiate the freezing wind" ... I love this phrase, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/12/2020 10:25:00 AM
Haunting last line, and you are a new Wordsworth of the Old Roman Road in That Blessed England, this hallowed isle. Stubble veil ... your footprint near Tussok, may live on ever. shalom, shalom on Resurrection Day (the Pagans called it Easter). and Thanks
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