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"My pen drips of sorrow and on this paper, I write each tear." A Rambling Poet Dear God, may I please have an answer, Am I ever permited to know Why the one who was still so much needed, Was the one who was chosen to go? You know I'd have carried the burden. You know I'd have given my all, If I could have kept my beloved son Until I too had answered Your call. And now you are coming for him, Lord, My brother, much younger than I. He is more like a son than a brother. Is it any wonder I cry? These two men so worthy and needed, Two men upon whom I depended, Their going diminishes this Earth And leaves my existence upended. I don't want to seem so ungrateful For the wonderful years that we had. But what will I do with this love, Lord, That is making my days now so sad? Is there such a need up in Heaven That is so much greater than ours? If so please give me a sign, Lord. I've searched and I've searched in your stars. Dear Lord, please stay through my sorrow. May I feel You right there by my side? Please guide him to the others in Heaven; When my younger brother has died. By: Joyce Johnson 8/13/11 For Constance's contest "Just Write" Won no. 1 in contest.

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Date: 8/18/2011 2:49:00 AM
I keep praying for a miracle to help your brother, Joyce. Surely, you have endured enough loss in your lifetime. So has young Diane below. Her husband was killed in the line of duty in Iraq. He was in his mid 20s at the time. I'm delighted to see you taking first place with your heartfelt poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/18/2011 2:34:00 AM
Dear Joyce, this poem touched me deeply. One of the things we share is this sense of "loss" to which nothing else compares. Congratulations, Diane
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Date: 8/16/2011 2:45:00 PM
Congratualtions Joyce on your First place win in my contest, this poem brought me to tears ~~
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Date: 8/15/2011 5:24:00 PM
This was so good Joyce, very moving. Congrats on your first place win!!
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Date: 8/15/2011 12:18:00 PM
This is truly so moving, Joyce-- one can definitely feel that pain and wonder why as well-- sending you hugs and super congrats for this very heartfelt write!
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Date: 8/15/2011 12:14:00 PM
Tearfully tremendous Joyce. Congratulations on your win blessings Paul
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Date: 8/15/2011 11:40:00 AM
oh, joyce.. a brief but rich shout-out of congrats on your glowing top win before soup knocks me off.. awhhh! huggs :) :)
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Date: 8/15/2011 10:54:00 AM
Quite an honor to read you moving poem presentation in Constance's "Just Write" Contest Joyce. Congratulations on your top honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/15/2011 10:37:00 AM
This is so good Joyce. Really enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your first place win
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Date: 8/15/2011 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Just Write" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2011 10:01:00 AM
Oh WoW! What a deeply touching piece. My heart goes out to you my friend and know that the Lord has heard this fervent prayer. God Bless, JB Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/14/2011 10:50:00 PM
congrats on your win. cory
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Date: 8/14/2011 10:47:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your first place win with these awesome words my friend..luv..
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Date: 8/14/2011 10:24:00 PM
congratulations on your first place win ~love Glenna
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Date: 8/14/2011 2:49:00 PM
Very expressive of the emotions that you must be feeling at the loss of a sibling and a son..Good one that reads like a winner in Constance's contest..Sara
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Date: 8/14/2011 7:09:00 AM
this is a wonderful expression of that which all of us who have lost a loved one feels, you did this so well...
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Date: 8/13/2011 11:57:00 PM
Wow, that is a very powerful poem. I had a tear for your pain that I could feel within each line of your poem! Life does go on even if it hurts so much! I hope everything is alright! You wrote this so eloquently and the flow was perfect!! Thanks for sharing such an awesome poem. Good luck in the contest!!
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