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Nursery Rhyme Or Stories Poetry Contest

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First Place

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A beautiful little princess wishes she were someone else
Perhaps a blue bird that sings or a black crow with a shrill                      
Or something soft with white whiskers, a long-tailed mouse!
From the balcony she watches the village children on the hill
As they run up, up, up, and then roll down, down, down 
They laugh and scream and sing merry songs and play 
The little princess sits alone, she wears butterfly wings and crown 
In an enormous castle with a tower, there she lives, far away
Who shall I be today is her most favorite made up game
In her own enchanted world, and with a grand imagination          
Ever so joyful day after day, where all remains the same
To be just as she is, pleased and abrim with gleeful elation

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Date: 12/30/2023 2:22:00 PM
Amazing write depicting the innocence in a aspiring girl... Very well done.. Happy New year
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Date: 12/30/2023 2:22:00 PM
Amazing write depicting the innocence in a aspiring girl... Very well done.. Happy New year
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/31/2023 10:47:00 AM
Thank you, Ashok! Happy New Year, dear!
Date: 12/26/2023 6:09:00 AM
I knew this would do well..So lovely.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/31/2023 10:45:00 AM
Thank you, SO!
Date: 12/24/2023 10:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Have a Merry Christmas.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/31/2023 10:46:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. I'm really enjoying nursery rhymes, thanks to you. Hope you had a very merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Date: 12/24/2023 7:15:00 AM
Sweetness, with a great message Anaya. Congratulations bff! :)
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/31/2023 10:45:00 AM
Thank you, Linda Alice!
Date: 12/23/2023 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What A fun/write/game to play/pretty picture. Can I Play??? Have A Very Blessed Christmas..................
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/31/2023 10:45:00 AM
Ha,ha, you may. Thank you, Paula!
Date: 12/19/2023 4:20:00 PM
A very good tale you tell, Anaya. Should do well in the contest. Children will love it! Smiles ~ Blessings for the season! Bill
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/31/2023 10:44:00 AM
Thank you, Bill! I appreciate your thoughts. Blessings to you and yours
Date: 12/15/2023 3:51:00 AM
Beautifully written Anaya. I read it as a very sad tale of the downside of being a princess. Locked away in a cold and lonely castle with no one to play with. Thankfully, she has a great imagination. Best of luck in the competition, my friend. I think this is a sure winner.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/15/2023 8:10:00 AM
I like your spin on it. This isn't about a lonely princess, not at all. She's not stereotypical, spoiled either. She is quite content and never contrary. Some prefer solitude, it's their nature. Imagination overcomes. Thank you, Jerry!
Date: 12/14/2023 3:58:00 PM
souds like a magical movie, i could see the long travelling, very enjoyable poem for me, thanks Poet
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/14/2023 4:03:00 PM
Very much appreciate that Yann! Thank you for taking time to read my poem. Blessings
Date: 12/14/2023 2:55:00 PM
You capture the magical thinking of a child within your poem. Great job. Best wishes in the contest.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/14/2023 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 12/14/2023 2:51:00 PM
Ooh ooh I know! Play Tammy Faye Baker today.
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/14/2023 2:56:00 PM
Hahaha Tom!
Date: 12/14/2023 1:13:00 PM
This is lovely Anaya.. you wrote is so well.. Best of luck in the contest.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/14/2023 2:54:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One!
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