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Whispering, Trembling, Feelings

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Listen to the beautiful Lingering in the tender voices Mingling with soup, potatoes, chunks Light joy, garlicky seasonings Inspiration falling, blending voices Temptations burning Away the darkness, the black yearnings Remember the shadows Blazing with hues of promises Erasing the melancholy, Voices alive with laughter Smiles knowing the vibrant Slow dance, a walk through graceful Truth said… Together we can tease the Color from darkness, Silence the star’s songs with Wonders beyond our own imaginations, Feelings breathless and warm, Forming a memory in the heart, The soul, conspiring with time to move From the dark to the light, Remembering only the breathless Caress of morning’s sun Shining on the heart, the smile – Whispering, trembling, feelings Bleeding through the dark, glistening Like the edges of a kindness Only known to the soul who hears Hearts instead of voices, Tears instead of ocean’s spraying Beautiful in the promises Made by those who sincerely pray For humanity, for hope, for grace For the love in eternal praise WTF Contest John lawless May 29, 2023

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Date: 6/8/2023 1:24:00 PM
Beautifully done Regina. Finally caught up to it when the contest filled. Great use of the line breaks to pace the read and accent the tenor of the meaning. Thanks for entering the contest
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Date: 6/8/2023 11:06:00 AM
I'm loving all the different takes on the contest theme, many congrats on your win Regina:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/8/2023 10:00:00 AM
Back with congrats and high fives Gina. I do love the promises found in your last stanza. Such a song of hope! So happy to see this on the winners list. Every time I see one of your poems posted I know I am in for a few moments of inspired fellowship! Blessings my friend for your beautiful ministry!
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Date: 6/8/2023 9:33:00 AM
Congrats on your contest podium win, Gina. No doubt your poem was delightful and deserving of the honor.
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Date: 6/5/2023 4:55:00 AM
Wow i could've missed it if i hadn't checked out this most wonderful poem well-deserving of the POTD honour you got. I liked the delicious first stanza and esp admired the last stanza of prayers and eternal praise wow!! Fab muse indeed! Kudos and CONGRATZ!
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Date: 6/2/2023 4:31:00 AM
Beautiful poem, bringing a lot of positive vibes and emphasizing the power of prayer. All the Best in the contest, Gina ! Also Hearty Congratulations on your POTD
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Date: 6/1/2023 10:24:00 AM
Gina, congratulations on your POTD! Your poem is so filled with remarkable images and lines like "listen to the beautiful," "glistening like the edges of a kindness." This is another in your series of profound faith. I so look forward to reading your faith filled words from your faithful heart. Hugs and blessings sweet friend!
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Date: 6/1/2023 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Joyful as always, Gina. I love the recipe as it unfolds into an inspiring "Only known to the soul who hears Hearts instead of voices" Most alluring WTF contender!
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Date: 5/31/2023 7:25:00 PM
Lovely Gina a big Congratulations on your POTD Honors.
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Date: 5/31/2023 7:20:00 PM
Regina, so happy to see an inspiring poem wrapped around this abbreviation. You have such a wonderful heart, my dear friend, and it shows through your poetry. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/31/2023 7:12:00 PM
Gina, forgive me for being lare in getting to your POTD.. How very exciting … Panagiota
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Date: 5/31/2023 3:42:00 PM
A delightful read, John. I like the uplifting end message. Congrats of POTD, Sara Etgen-Baker
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Date: 5/31/2023 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations on having your wonderful lines chosen as potd, Gina!
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Date: 5/31/2023 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear Gina, on such a beautiful poem being recognized as POTD. Enjoyed the tender, thought-provoking rendition.
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Date: 5/31/2023 10:46:00 AM
I think this piece is probably what poetry is supposed to be about. An excellent choice for POTD, Regina, and BOL in the contest.
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Date: 5/31/2023 8:28:00 AM
Very emotionally engaging, Gina. It resonates with my soul. Congratulations on your POTD! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your insightful poetry, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 5/31/2023 7:46:00 AM
Gina, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor !
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Date: 5/31/2023 7:05:00 AM
Ooh…so beautiful! You pulled me in with that first verse with a mixture of delicious food and tender voices! Congratulations on POTD! And a fave for me, sweet one! xx
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Date: 5/31/2023 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations Gina for such a we crafted and spiritually uplifting poem. It is a well -deserved recognition.
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Date: 5/31/2023 5:11:00 AM
Gina, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 5/31/2023 5:02:00 AM
Hi Gina what a brilliant poem definitely deserved zPOTD. Real talent shown kudus my friend. Hugs Blessings Jennifer
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Date: 5/31/2023 4:39:00 AM
Tenderly written from your heart, as always, Gina ~ warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 5/31/2023 12:53:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Gina :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/31/2023 12:42:00 AM
Congratulations Gina on POTD….Debx
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Date: 5/31/2023 12:37:00 AM
Beautifully written and thought provoking Gina. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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