Notes About The Poem

Whispering, Trembling, Feelings

Listen to the beautiful
Lingering in the tender voices
Mingling with soup, potatoes, chunks
Light joy, garlicky seasonings
Inspiration falling, blending voices
Temptations burning
Away the darkness, the black yearnings

Remember the shadows
Blazing with hues of promises
Erasing the melancholy,
Voices alive with laughter
Smiles knowing the vibrant
Slow dance, a walk through graceful
Truth said…

Together we can tease the 
Color from darkness,
Silence the star’s songs with
Wonders beyond our own imaginations,
Feelings breathless and warm,
Forming a memory in the heart,
The soul, conspiring with time to move
From the dark to the light,
Remembering only the breathless
Caress of morning’s sun

Shining on the heart, the smile –

Whispering, trembling, feelings

Bleeding through the dark, glistening
Like the edges of a kindness
Only known to the soul who hears
Hearts instead of voices, 
Tears instead of ocean’s spraying
Beautiful in the promises
Made by those who sincerely pray
For humanity, for hope, for grace
For the love in eternal praise


WTF Contest
John lawless
May 29, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lawless Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Beautifully done Regina. Finally caught up to it when the contest filled. Great use of the line breaks to pace the read and accent the tenor of the meaning. Thanks for entering the contest
Allison Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 11:06 AM
I'm loving all the different takes on the contest theme, many congrats on your win Regina:-) hugs Jan xx
Kauffman Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 10:00 AM
Back with congrats and high fives Gina. I do love the promises found in your last stanza. Such a song of hope! So happy to see this on the winners list. Every time I see one of your poems posted I know I am in for a few moments of inspired fellowship! Blessings my friend for your beautiful ministry!
Poet Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 9:33 AM
Congrats on your contest podium win, Gina. No doubt your poem was delightful and deserving of the honor.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 4:55 AM
Wow i could've missed it if i hadn't checked out this most wonderful poem well-deserving of the POTD honour you got. I liked the delicious first stanza and esp admired the last stanza of prayers and eternal praise wow!! Fab muse indeed! Kudos and CONGRATZ!
George Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 4:31 AM
Beautiful poem, bringing a lot of positive vibes and emphasizing the power of prayer. All the Best in the contest, Gina ! Also Hearty Congratulations on your POTD
Kauffman Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Gina, congratulations on your POTD! Your poem is so filled with remarkable images and lines like "listen to the beautiful," "glistening like the edges of a kindness." This is another in your series of profound faith. I so look forward to reading your faith filled words from your faithful heart. Hugs and blessings sweet friend!
Anaya Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 9:41 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Joyful as always, Gina. I love the recipe as it unfolds into an inspiring "Only known to the soul who hears Hearts instead of voices" Most alluring WTF contender!
Tor Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 7:25 PM
Lovely Gina a big Congratulations on your POTD Honors.
Nicole Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Regina, so happy to see an inspiring poem wrapped around this abbreviation. You have such a wonderful heart, my dear friend, and it shows through your poetry. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Romios Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 7:12 PM
Gina, forgive me for being lare in getting to your POTD.. How very exciting … Panagiota
Lane Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 1:57 PM
Congratulations on having your wonderful lines chosen as potd, Gina!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear Gina, on such a beautiful poem being recognized as POTD. Enjoyed the tender, thought-provoking rendition.
Slaughter Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 10:46 AM
I think this piece is probably what poetry is supposed to be about. An excellent choice for POTD, Regina, and BOL in the contest.
Baker Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Very emotionally engaging, Gina. It resonates with my soul. Congratulations on your POTD! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your insightful poetry, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
La France Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 7:46 AM
Gina, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor !
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 7:05 AM
Ooh…so beautiful! You pulled me in with that first verse with a mixture of delicious food and tender voices! Congratulations on POTD! And a fave for me, sweet one! xx
Kaufman Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 6:15 AM
Congratulations Gina for such a we crafted and spiritually uplifting poem. It is a well -deserved recognition.
Kitchin Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 5:11 AM
Gina, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD!
Proxenos Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 5:02 AM
Hi Gina what a brilliant poem definitely deserved zPOTD. Real talent shown kudus my friend. Hugs Blessings Jennifer
Seeker Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 4:39 AM
Tenderly written from your heart, as always, Gina ~ warmest congratulations on POTD
Andresen Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 12:53 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Gina :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
M  Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 12:42 AM
Congratulations Gina on POTD….Debx
Cunningham Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 12:37 AM
Beautifully written and thought provoking Gina. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:25 PM
that is sure an inspiring take on WTF!!! thanks for your recent contest, also, Gina
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