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Where Maple Leaves Drift

As I walk a path where maple leaves drift and float, under a cloudless sky of brilliant blue; I place many in the pocket of my raincoat, 'till I have umpteen in each faded hue. Under a cloudless sky of brilliant blue, I meander in the smell of nature's sweet scent; 'till I have umpteen in each faded hue, suppose, I should mourn the decay in a lament. I meander in the smell of nature's sweet scent, there are tears for such beautiful decay; suppose, I should mourn the decay in a lament, I love how God painted each one today. There are tears for such beautiful decay, now, raindrops are falling to kiss my waiting lip; I love how God painted each one today, and all around me leaves drip, flip and skip. Now, raindrops are falling to kiss my waiting lip, I place many in the pocket of my raincoat; and all around me leaves drip, flip and skip, as I walk a path where maple leaves drift and float. __________________________________ October 3, 2019 Poetry/Pantoum/Where Maple Leaves Drift Copyright Protected, ID 19-1185-933-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. NA in the contest, Poet's October Pantoum, Judged - November 7, 2019 Submitted to the contest, N-A rerun 4 sponsor, John Hamilton Third Place

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Date: 12/22/2019 3:26:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Constance
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Constance La France
Date: 12/23/2019 6:02:00 PM
Greg, thanks for the congrats !
Date: 12/22/2019 3:04:00 PM
Dear heart congrats on your win! Beautiful!;)
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Constance La France
Date: 12/23/2019 6:02:00 PM
Brenda, thanks for the congrats and the beautiful !
Date: 12/22/2019 2:23:00 PM
Seems like a lot of Pantoum's didn't make the cut in the contest, I'm starting to like them the more I read them, thanks Constance for this entry, congrats on a great write and win!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/23/2019 6:04:00 PM
John, thanks so much for the contest and for my placement, i guess some just don't like pantoum, happy you are liking them !
Date: 10/11/2019 10:42:00 AM
So lovely, Constance! Janice
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Constance La France
Date: 10/13/2019 6:40:00 PM
Janice thanks so much for the lovely !
Date: 10/4/2019 11:20:00 AM
gracefully written...I love how you switched from leaves to raindrops going in the pocket :)
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Constance La France
Date: 10/4/2019 12:08:00 PM
David, thanks for visiting and so happy you caught the transition from leaves to raindrops that I did ~
Date: 10/3/2019 1:28:00 PM
You have placed my vision through your eyes, wonderful!!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/3/2019 1:45:00 PM
Bobby, thanks for visiting and for the wonderful, appreciate !

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