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Where Life Basks

Tender wraps the morning as my sunshine lays her claim bent green grass and daisies all her glory calls my name Simple walks, her beauty talks I wander bout her home hanging boughs they do arouse my feelings rarely shown Beat my heart a thousand beats let my fingers brush your cheek hold me in your loving arms as I climb your mountain peaks Ne'er light nor dark shall ever mask Grandeur where life truly basks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/13/2017 9:03:00 AM
A beautiful love sonnet, Tim:)
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Date: 5/13/2017 5:16:00 AM
Good Morning Tim. This entry and your words are perfectly gorgeous and beautiful in every way. Yes, every way. Need I say more. I think not. Have a wonderful morning. Well done entirely.
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Date: 5/12/2017 9:05:00 PM
So lovely Tim <3 and romantic :)
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Date: 5/12/2017 3:37:00 PM
This is so beautiful Tim..I really love sonnets..It seems like a beautiful day..and you are transmitting its energy...Lovely.
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Date: 5/12/2017 2:37:00 PM
Your third verse could stand alone as a beautifully written poem. I would melt if someone would write this way for me. It's tantalizing, Tim.
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Date: 5/12/2017 11:11:00 AM
I love the alternate number of feet per line you have used, it makes for great cadence :) I wish for you what you wish for yourself!
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Date: 5/12/2017 10:38:00 AM
Full of love and joy, Tim...beautiful start to my day...thank you
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Date: 5/12/2017 10:04:00 AM
Beautiful Tim, seems you have some lovely scenery this morning as well.
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