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"We are stardust we are golden and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden" - Joni Mitchell In hallowed halls the ancients spun their tales on how it was existence came to be each version proffered as the holy grail but in the end just vain philosophies For though their quest was noble in its cause the evidence presented often lacked in verity, it gives the thinker pause- true faith is based on certitude and fact the poet sang of stardust and it's true as all of God's creation shares a past the elements within provide a clue to miracles that stand as unsurpassed in Eden mankind's story has its start- where simple dust became the human heart

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Date: 11/4/2024 6:46:00 PM
You got it right my friend. Three words God created us and the universe. Great truth in your Poetry and proven fact. Be blessed my friend for sharing the truth, and having the courage to do so...
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/4/2024 7:23:00 PM
Much thx Michael
Date: 7/20/2024 5:58:00 PM
What a beautiful sonnet with a great ending...so much truth too :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/21/2024 5:12:00 AM
Thx paige
Date: 7/19/2024 6:38:00 PM
Loved this song as a teenager... Was searching for that garden, for the reasons for existence. And suffering. From Genesis to Revelation - how Paradise was lost to how it will be regained... "All of God's creation shares a past.." In these days, the human heart can find healing being in a spiritual paradise. Your sonnet has a "bard like" feel - Poetic quality of words like " hallowed halls, holy grail, noble quest - leading us to the last line, simple yet powerful statement! ((Hugs)) Aqua
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/20/2024 5:15:00 AM
I thought you might appreciate this one. Thx
Date: 7/19/2024 12:32:00 PM
...nice write....yes, our cosmic home be a 'time (change) existence wrt instant irrational constants (pi, phi, etc.) number changes.....so, for us it be as unpredictable.....and, all different life species have different perception times to perceive different sensory perception spectrums......stan
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/19/2024 1:35:00 PM
That's exactly what I was thinking
Date: 7/19/2024 11:38:00 AM
God did the creating so that is good enough for me. It says that he knits us together in our mother's womb. Very interesting thoughts penned in this one. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/19/2024 1:35:00 PM
Yes ma'am and thx back
Date: 7/11/2024 11:19:00 AM
Oh, I love it when your philosopher, theologian, pilgrim of faith inspires your pen, Tom! The last couplet is especially good "where simple dust became the human heart." Splendid! Blessings to your human heart! Wonderful coupling of stardust to creation!
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/11/2024 11:38:00 AM
All energy and matter necessary for existence have a common Source, hence it's all related in one way or another. Thx Sam
Date: 7/8/2024 1:18:00 PM
Great penning of form and substance, a truly crafted English Sonnet!
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/8/2024 1:30:00 PM
Thx Craig. It's a little clunky in spots and not a great volta. Next time better
Date: 7/8/2024 11:45:00 AM
Your sonnet rhymes and flows so well.. You've always been good at meter.. this is an apt example for your contest..
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/8/2024 11:51:00 AM
We try, we try
Date: 7/8/2024 9:42:00 AM
...and designed most of her covers "painter derailed by circumstance". How you do not write more often about your faith in Sonnet’s. This is poetry one remembers. The right amount of fable and wisdom. As you know, the KJV contains many errors. 1,600. We need to get back to the garden and get grounded. I’m faving, for we must believe in miracles.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/8/2024 11:52:00 AM
Without accepting miracles the universe is unexplainable. Thx Anaya
Date: 7/8/2024 3:30:00 AM
Simpler dust became the human heart-May that simple dust be a reminder to me of how fragile I am..May I always be humble enough to remember-From dust to dust.I enjoyed reading your poem Tom .
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/8/2024 4:39:00 AM
We're all fragile and easily wounded. May your heart be strengthened by the love and kindness sent your way Charmaine
Date: 7/7/2024 9:05:00 AM
A very good piece, Tom. There is a fine line between "faith" and "belief". I believe that true belief is based on certitude and fact. And I sometimes wonder how the human species might have turned out had another part of Adam's anatomy been used to create woman...instead of one of his ribs...which he didn't really need anyway.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/7/2024 9:29:00 AM
Ahhh bone marrow was the key. But you're so right, credulity is not the same as faith, neither is naivete. The Bible itself (to most people's surprise, I think) states that faith is based on evidence - Hebrews 11:1
Date: 7/7/2024 8:16:00 AM
In hallowed halls the ancients spun their tales, on how it was existence came to be .. All of God's creations do share a past .. We each give our human opinion but evidence is often lacking, pause and think did mankind come from stardust, according to the poet Joni Mitchell, it did but God is omniscient so could have created life from stardust or anything else He desired, we believe that life and living is the most profound, unsurpassed miracle/mystery of this world. So well penned . Hugs Jen
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/7/2024 9:31:00 AM
To create something from nothing, ie, all the elements essential for matter (and ultimately, life) cannot be explained by science or by means of some Big Bang in space. Only by means of an all powerful, all wise Creator do we exist and breathe. I love your comment
Date: 7/7/2024 8:05:00 AM
Well done, Tom. C,S & N, did Joni’s words justice - all are (were) phenomenal artists & writers. Thank you for providing such a refreshing read on this Sunday morn.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/7/2024 9:32:00 AM
Yessir my sonnet master friend
Date: 7/7/2024 7:54:00 AM
Philosophers want to question everything and want answers to rhetorical questions too. The world is a mystery and there's a reason it can't all be explained. Lovely piece Dear Tommy. You ended it so well. We are dust and we go back as one. Back to our maker, back to his hands and his realm. You're just not an amazing storyteller Tom, you're one the best I've seen and I don't know a lot. You're a profound Poet. Hope you have been well?
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/7/2024 9:34:00 AM
That's quite a compliment coming from such an amazing poet as yourself. Yes, I'm doing ok
Date: 7/7/2024 7:21:00 AM
Love that Joni Mitchell quote. “Where simple dust became the human heart.” I love that one too.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/7/2024 9:34:00 AM
Much thx Richard
Date: 7/7/2024 5:17:00 AM
"in Eden mankind's story has its start- where simple dust became the human heart" Very nicely penned, I enjoyed the read
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/7/2024 5:20:00 AM
Much thx Joseph
Date: 7/6/2024 9:00:00 PM
So many thoughts and philosophies have emerged through long past about the origin of the life of man on earth. But they lack authenticity. In many ways, the quest of the ancestors into the mystery of existence has helped us. But their conclusions lacked verity. We can rightly assume that life originated from stardust and got molded by the hands of God. A beautiful journey into the roots of man's origin, dear Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/7/2024 5:15:00 AM
You're always so good about summarizing a poem. Thx Valsa
Date: 7/6/2024 6:17:00 PM
Cool quote. And also I love how you did the ending couplet. Good sonneteering
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/6/2024 6:19:00 PM
Everyone seems to like that last line. Gosh, I wish all my lines could be inspired. We're all trying
Date: 7/6/2024 2:25:00 PM
Yes, it has been ' dust ' from the very start. Beautiful and spiritual in every way. Your thoughts lift my heart. :)
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/6/2024 5:55:00 PM
You're welcome, Tommy. Many blessings to you. :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/6/2024 4:36:00 PM
Thx Brandy Nicole. Have a lovely Sunday
Date: 7/6/2024 2:11:00 PM
A masterfully written sonnet, as always, Tommy, love the closing couplet. I appreciate the reference in your comment below; like you, I am just a simple poet.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/6/2024 4:37:00 PM
Yes, I don't use a lot of high sounding words. Just a simple storyteller. Thx John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/6/2024 2:26:00 PM
You're an amazing poet, John.
Date: 7/6/2024 1:15:00 PM
Well I came upon a poem by Tom "Woodstock" Woody.. :) You kindly commented on a poem of mine today and I'm going to repeat here in part what you said of my poem because your comments may well refer to your great work too.."You're so good at rhyme and meter and your poems always carry a message, sometimes subtle.." I enjoyed the read very much. Cheers - Gary
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/6/2024 4:38:00 PM
Thx Garth, er, Gary lol. Appreciate da visit
Date: 7/6/2024 11:30:00 AM
The last two lines sums this up nicely love them! Great poem!
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Date: 7/6/2024 11:36:00 AM
It does, though not likely to be popular with hard core evolutionists. Thx
Date: 7/6/2024 8:47:00 AM
Very beautiful, Woody; you get a FAV from me. Bravo!
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/6/2024 9:20:00 AM
Favs are kewl. Thx Joe
Date: 7/6/2024 1:27:00 AM
Your sonnet is perfect. Great rhymes. And great contrasts of life. You did well.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/6/2024 5:19:00 AM
Man's philosophy vs. Godly wisdom and truth. Thx Vic
Date: 7/5/2024 2:17:00 PM
Hey Tommy, this is a beautiful, so well written sonnet and I love the perfect rhymes. I totally agree with Daniel - there’s so much flawlessly blended here. The opening lines really grabs your attention. ‘ true faith is based on certitude and fact’ ‘ the poet sang of stardust ‘ love those lines especially. The ending couplet is stunning, ‘ where simple dust became the human heart’. A thought provoking and reflective read and the quote and stunning picture pairs perfectly.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/5/2024 2:20:00 PM
If you'd like to learn how to do one in iambic pentameter check out my other sonnets as well as Mark Massey, Craig Cornish and John Gondolph. They know their stuff
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/5/2024 2:20:00 PM
Thx so much for visit and comment!
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Christina Bowring
Date: 7/5/2024 2:18:00 PM
Great seeing you do a sonnet. Thank you for being one of my inspirations. Have a great weekend :)
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