Andrea Dietrich Poet Choka

When the Moon Is Full

Science has disproved
the legends about full moons,
but one thing is for certain:
when I see it thus -
gold and glowing in the sky -
something indeed does happen.

My mind takes flight, and
I’m more in tune with nature.
I marvel that such beauty
occupies heaven.
When it takes me by surprise,
its effulgence delights me.

I’m led to ponder
how something so far away
seems so right up in my face;
how it has appeared
through eons, steadfastly at
the set time of its cycle.

Is it no wonder
the poems it has inspired
and lovers it has entranced?
One of the few things
of God’s brilliant creations
shared equally by us all!

By Andrea Dietrich
Written 10/15/11

For Russell Sivey's Contest:
What Happens During a Full Moon?

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Charlotte Puddifoot November 2, 2011 at 3:29 PM congrats on another winner andrea! you captured all that there is to say about the moon in this excellent choka :-)

Carolyn Devonshire November 2, 2011 at 12:34 PM A full moon gives me a different perspective as well, Andrea. It makes me feel one with the universe and "in tune with nature" too. You're such a talented writer, my friend. Congratulations on your win in Russell's contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 2, 2011 at 10:00 AM Congrats Andrea on third place win with this mesmerizing entry my friend.. luv it...

James Marshall Goff November 2, 2011 at 8:52 AM finely crafted "moon thoughts" Bravo! Andrea! jimbo

Carol Sunshine Brown November 2, 2011 at 5:54 AM Congratulations on your win in Russell's "What Happens During A Full Moon" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta November 2, 2011 at 1:12 AM Congratulations on the win with this lovely poem, Andrea

Margaret Foster November 2, 2011 at 12:18 AM It is true that such beauty and wonder is often taken for granted. You have written an exquisite poem here Andrea. Thank you... Luv Margaret

Judy Ball October 28, 2011 at 8:11 AM The moon truly does inspire us all in one way or another. I love how it looks so silver like a heavenly gem in the sky. Great job Andrea. Good luck in the contest. JB

Jslambert Mister Roboto October 25, 2011 at 11:20 PM Man, you went off on this one! Impressive! I entered this contest as well. Although now, I am kinda second guessing my entry due to the trivial meaning involved (w/ mine) Nice work. Like you always BRING!

Black Eyed Susan October 24, 2011 at 7:32 AM Thought provoking poem. Like the moon exists out of time, since it's been viewed by our ancestors, for eons as you said, its beauty seen by all. i hope russell likes this :)

Jack Horne October 22, 2011 at 8:01 AM Yes, the moon is indeed beautiful. Lovely write, my friend

Carolyn Devonshire October 21, 2011 at 5:16 PM Indeed, the moon sparks our fantasy and is a great source of inspiration for both writers and lovers. Great entry for Russell's contest and I wish you success. Mine was a double choka, but I chose to separate the 5-7-7 verses. Maybe I should rethink that if it confused you. Love, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song October 21, 2011 at 10:30 AM I am NOT A REPUBLICAN...ha ha....I am an independent and more assuredly, AN AMERICAN< Andrea. Your Halloween and Autumn writes could fill up a best-selling poetry book by now.......loved the one you wrote about leaves in a waltz...it is a favorite! Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A October 21, 2011 at 9:54 AM Andrea, another wonderful poem,, good luck in the contest...p.d.

Elizabeth Wesley October 21, 2011 at 8:46 AM An astral work of art that captures my imagination. The moon outweighs the sun for poetic expression and mystery in my humble opinion. Great poem Andrea!

Phyllis Babcock October 21, 2011 at 8:21 AM love this one-just off to work and thought I would try and see if this site was up and running today and it is. means lots of reading for the weekend. will email you later. love phyl

Edward Ebbs October 21, 2011 at 8:08 AM Very nice kiddo :-)

Sara Kendrick October 21, 2011 at 5:02 AM Really like the ending..Good luck in the contest of Russell's ...Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Soup is up so we can dine..Sara

Tony Lane October 21, 2011 at 4:49 AM Lunarous and lovely. Tony

Zzzzz Zzzzz October 21, 2011 at 4:04 AM Good, evocative poem, Andrea. The moon has fascinated since time immemorial. Hope you are enjoying the fresh, hot bowl of Soup now being served! Hope it doesn't run out anytime soon! xoxo Robert.

Kash Poet October 21, 2011 at 1:57 AM The soup timing has been changed Andrea I mean the time zone it follows.Now it is following your time zone.Is it called Mountain time zone?

Kash Poet October 21, 2011 at 1:53 AM Very nice verse here Andrea.Beautifully presented .Thanx for informing me Soup is back.Best wishes.

Joyce Johnson October 20, 2011 at 11:58 PM Well done Andrea. Lovely poem. Good luck in the contest.

Gwendolen Song October 20, 2011 at 11:46 PM Lovely choka, with great images! Yes, many great poems have been inspired by a full moon. I sure enjoyed this entry. Gwendolen

Cyndi Macmillan October 20, 2011 at 9:18 PM Hey, there, Andrea, good to read you, finally. Ain't it nice to be back, though? Lovely one, this. Shared equally, I really liked this. There is a unity in watching the moon, isn't there? A feeling of NOT being alone. This should have a winning ribbon. Looking forward to catching up on reading you and all my faves! Cheers and hugs. I can't type long- hurt my wrist. Ice and bandage. Lugging around a toddler ... not for wuzzies!