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When I Am Broken Premiere Contest Winner

When I am broken dear Lord you carry me, hold me and protect me from life's storm; for this world can be so cruel and so evil, words whirling like bees in a swarm. When someone tries to break my spirit Lord, their words stab me like sharp knives; and all because you gave me this gift of writing, oh, yes Lord, true- I am a girl who survives. When I am strong you just stand close and watch, but today you are carrying me through my pain; and you kiss my tears away and soothe my hair, like a father- you protect me from the rain. _______________________________ December 3, 2019 Poetry/Quatrain/When I am Broken Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1205-100-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the Premier contest, Your Best New Poem sponsor, Emile Pinet First Place

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Date: 8/25/2021 2:24:00 AM
So so soothing Constance... and yes, God is there near us, ALWAYS, watching our every moment of sad and joy, protecting us EVER... Just came here to read some of your poems... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/25/2021 10:27:00 AM
Ani, thanks for coming to this poem, it is a meaningful one to me ~Constance
Date: 1/5/2020 10:21:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 1/5/2020 10:52:00 PM
Claudie, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !
Date: 1/3/2020 12:36:00 AM
Very nice work. I enjoyed it
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Date: 1/3/2020 1:50:00 PM
Matt, thanks so much for visiting my poetry and the compliment !
Date: 1/1/2020 8:25:00 AM
Beautiful work! Well done!
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Date: 1/1/2020 1:06:00 PM
Michael, thank you for the beautiful, this poem has become very meaningful for me ~
Date: 12/31/2019 9:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful Trophy Constance. Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo ; )
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Date: 1/1/2020 1:06:00 PM
Connie thanks for the wonderful and the congratulations !
Date: 12/31/2019 9:05:00 AM
A belated Congrats. I hope you have a fun New Years Eve.
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Date: 12/31/2019 10:48:00 AM
Richard, thanks so much for the congrats and Happy New Year to you too !
Date: 12/30/2019 9:29:00 AM
Wonderful write Constance congrats on a first place win!
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Date: 12/30/2019 11:32:00 AM
John, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats !
Date: 12/29/2019 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations Constance on your trophy win in Emil's contest, bravo!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2019 11:57:00 AM
Tania, thank you so much for the congratulations, I am just so happy with my trophy win !
Date: 12/29/2019 1:21:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. I especially delight in this line: "like a father- you protect me from the rain." God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2019 11:58:00 AM
Beata, thanks so much for the congrats, God bless you today and into the new year
Date: 12/28/2019 8:22:00 PM
you got at least two number one wins today. VERY WELL DONE, Dear heart!! You are going to get Emile's amazing book now!! Congrats to you.
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Date: 12/29/2019 11:58:00 AM
Andrea, I know and like WOW, thanks for the congrats !
Date: 12/28/2019 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations Constance! Your poem has placed "First" in my contest. It was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 12/29/2019 12:00:00 PM
Emile, thank you for another great contest and I am excited with my trophy win and I can imagine how difficult it must have been to select the winning poems with so many that entered.
Date: 12/6/2019 1:16:00 PM
Hello Dear Heart, a lovely poem to God. Yes he is there to protect us when we need it. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 12/11/2019 1:18:00 PM
Mery Christmas Dear heart. Have a nice day.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/6/2019 8:30:00 PM
Darlene, thanks for visiting and for your nice comment !
Date: 12/4/2019 10:19:00 AM
Very touching and devotional poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/6/2019 8:32:00 PM
Subimal, thanks for the lovely comment !
Date: 12/4/2019 4:39:00 AM
You are never alone Dear Heart. He is always with you. This faith, and belief, you must hold fast to, because all others are transitory. Believe in Him always, otherwise his journey for us was for nothing and his journey, must never be for nothing ... and always believe in yourself, no matter how tough the going gets, never ever ever give up on yourself. x
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Date: 12/6/2019 8:32:00 PM
Lady, thanks so much for the beautiful comment, appreciate !
Date: 12/3/2019 11:14:00 PM
Wonderful addition to the contest. Best of luck Constance. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 12/6/2019 8:33:00 PM
Greg, thanks so much for the wonderful !
Date: 12/3/2019 8:02:00 PM
Excellent poem Dear Heart. It is so true the world can be evil and cruel and so unfair to many. Thankfully you have this protection. Keep the faith :)
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Constance La France
Date: 12/6/2019 8:33:00 PM
Heidi, thanks for the excellent and the nice comment !

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