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When All Seemed Lost

WHEN ALL SEEMED LOST (A SLEEPING BEAUTY TALE) Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust. The needle, jagged, waiting patiently for the princess-in-hiding. Wicked lusts, smacking cruel lipstick vaingloriously. Eyes flicker like candlesticks in pumpkin. The fairy-witch desire - draw royal blood. Enmity sown between newborn and sin. Clairvoyant nails tap on the cradle’s hood. The war years seemed like only yesterday. Veins of fire popping, sinister words breathe a dragon’s revenge — upstart court to pay. Dripping sweat, serpentine coiled, striking, seethes: “This child thus blest, now cursed to endless sleep, unless,” she cackles, “true love find its mark.” The bottomless ocean won’t seem so deep!” The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark. 4/18/2018 One, Nine and Sixteen Contest Lines 1,9 and 16 preset by sponsor, Viv Wigley.

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Date: 5/8/2018 11:11:00 AM
Wow! Nice job Kim! You took this one in a whole different direction and masterfully I might add. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2018 4:30:00 PM
Thanks, Dean!
Date: 5/3/2018 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on a great win,Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thank you, Ralph!
Date: 5/3/2018 1:36:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your great win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Date: 5/2/2018 6:04:00 PM
You have woven a very magical tale here, Kim. Many congrats on your top-notch win. sincerely, Elaine
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2018 6:39:00 PM
Thanks so much! xx
Date: 5/2/2018 2:54:00 PM
I am amazed at how well you have connected those seemingly unconnected sentences. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:48:00 PM
I am amazed at the great poetry incorporating those seemingly un connected lines. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2018 2:48:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joyce! Hugs...Kim
Date: 5/2/2018 11:59:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win..Great imagery throughout, but love the 2nd stanza .
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 5/2/2018 11:50:00 AM
A lovely fairy tale Kim, Many congratulations on your win in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! :)
Date: 5/2/2018 10:09:00 AM
What a great fairy tale! This is awesome with imagery and excitement. Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2018 11:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Susan!
Date: 5/2/2018 5:59:00 AM
Back with congrats, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2018 7:24:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 5/2/2018 2:51:00 AM
Written like a fairy-tale, great work Kim. Congratulations.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2018 7:23:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 4/18/2018 11:48:00 AM
Your imagery is spectacular, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2018 2:53:00 PM
Thanks, Line!

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