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captivating, your eyes glisten, I turn away with shy excitement......... One Amazing Line A Rambling Poet Contest Rick Parise

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Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/17/2010 6:41:00 AM

Congrats ..this made my heart beat faster. BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 1:55:00 PM

Good one...Congratulations..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 12/15/2010 1:53:00 PM

Congratulations on 2nd place in my contest, there was something so innocent and so simple about this, that just spoke to me of real life~~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/15/2010 11:46:00 AM

A wonderful statement that made me smile thinking of you as this shy little boy. Congratulations on your win, Rick! Love, Carolyn

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/15/2010 9:30:00 AM

congradulations in Constances contest. john

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/15/2010 8:35:00 AM

beautiful line Rick, congrats on your win in the contest

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/15/2010 8:24:00 AM

We all have that first moment of contact with the someone who makes us shy, don't we Rick? I have ! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/15/2010 8:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Rick! Hope all is well. Love, Audrey

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/15/2010 6:45:00 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/15/2010 3:38:00 AM

best wishes on your well-deserved award, rick! much enjoyed… nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2010 9:39:00 PM

OH, I just love the romantic ones! Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/14/2010 7:32:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line ..enjoy your top ten victory with luv my friend..

John Freeman

Date: 12/14/2010 5:36:00 PM

Congratulations Rick on your worthy 2nt place. Agape, Moses

Deb Radke

Date: 12/14/2010 2:49:00 PM

ps. forgot to rate (7) and also to say, the title is perfect. Deb

Deb Radke

Date: 12/14/2010 2:48:00 PM

I read this earlier, when you posted it, and wish I had told you then how well written I thought this was; how it captures that very moment... Very good and congratulations on your win in the monoku contest.

James Fraser

Date: 12/14/2010 1:50:00 PM

Cute amazing line Rick, beautifully written. Congrats on your win in Constance's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2010 4:58:00 AM

Congratulations Rick on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 12/12/2010 10:35:00 PM

Hi Rick a lovely captivating line.It tells clearly about that first look when we feel an attraction toward someone,the butterflies in the stomach moment and mixed emotions of desire and yet nervous excitement.Lovely!And you have captured it so well with your well chosen words.I wish you all the best for the contest.Love June(Sylvia)