We Danced In the Kitchen

Hearts mangled by grief
Lost in separate mazes
Cooking a half-hearted meal
A turn of the head, a quick glance
Trembling hands reach out
Right hand in left, a gentle waltz
to sweet soul sounds on the radio
We danced in the kitchen

Then hold your baby tight
Hold your baby so tight crying song
Swaying to Harold Melvin and the Bluenotes
"If-you-don't-know-me-by-now"
Tear soaked necks and shoulders
Melting into each other
Melting and blending into one
We danced in the kitchen

Oh how we danced
How we danced to the moon
How we danced to the dawn
How we danced in the kitchen

Sweet Jesus let it be so
Let it be so again
Let the music play on
Let us dance one last song
Let us waltz one last waltz
Let us dance in the kitchen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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La France Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:05 PM
Tim, your lyrics were beautifully sad and congratulations on your win in my contest
Onclaud Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 1:10 AM
you sway with this one, tim!... sweet congrats on your win!..huggs
Williams Gault Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 7:03 PM
Such heartfelt emotion that colors this piece, this was soul stirring. Congratulaions!
Kimathi Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 2:07 AM
Congrats Tim, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
A  Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Tim,, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 4:49 AM
What an emotional verse.... Congrats Tim, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Richards Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 2:19 PM
This one always melts the heart in the aftermath of losing the love of your life, dear Tim. I could read it again and again, my friend.
Haight Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Your poem brought tears to my eyes, Tim. So much I can identify with in your powerful poem. I pray you keep dancing for a long time. Congrats on your fine well-deserved podium win. 7+Fav Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 8:52 PM
A 7 for this poignant WINNING piece that touched me, Tim. Janice
Teagan Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 7:53 PM
Tim! How exciting for me to see that this is your poem. It is so touching, really, I teared up... very beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
Ryerson Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Thank you SO much Becca!
Kimathi Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Congrats Tim, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Devnath  Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Beautiful dance in kitchen of life's beautiful memory. Beautifully expressed. A 7. Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Scars Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 10:18 AM
Tim, such a beautiful poem you wrote here, it moved me...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Ryerson Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Thank you SO much Laura!
A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 12:42 PM
TIM, wonderful win. **SKAT**
Y. Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 3:57 PM
Tim,Thanks for participating in my contest. Congrats on your 1st place win! :-) Alexis
Wigley Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 12:26 AM
Lovely write, Tim, and the song gives it a nice sense of time and place. Well done. Regards, Viv
Lindley Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 5:35 PM
Congrats on your win with this truly superb poem!
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 4:46 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Tim. Amazing emotions in the loss of sweet love that gave me goosebumps. Sandra
A  Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 1:03 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your Any Sad Poem win. LOVE **SKAT**
A. Sharma Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 1:57 AM
Congrats on ur win Tim with this wonderful write!
Jamoner Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 12:35 PM
For Love speaks out so quietly In the need to share.
Kayode Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 8:58 AM
It is nice to see this super one on the winning list,congrats Tim.
Mehta Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 5:55 AM
Nice flow of expressions, Tim, congrats
Allison Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 4:33 AM
many congrats on your win it is great to read poems I have previously not read:-) hugs jan xxx
Konos Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 11:51 PM
No bad writers in this contest! You were fast, furious, humorous, romantic,lost, found, sought after, wondrous! THANKS FOR ENTERING! I'M HAPPY!
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