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We Danced In the Kitchen

Hearts mangled by grief Lost in separate mazes Cooking a half-hearted meal A turn of the head, a quick glance Trembling hands reach out Right hand in left, a gentle waltz to sweet soul sounds on the radio We danced in the kitchen Then hold your baby tight Hold your baby so tight crying song Swaying to Harold Melvin and the Bluenotes "If-you-don't-know-me-by-now" Tear soaked necks and shoulders Melting into each other Melting and blending into one We danced in the kitchen Oh how we danced How we danced to the moon How we danced to the dawn How we danced in the kitchen Sweet Jesus let it be so Let it be so again Let the music play on Let us dance one last song Let us waltz one last waltz Let us dance in the kitchen

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Date: 10/16/2016 8:05:00 PM
Tim, your lyrics were beautifully sad and congratulations on your win in my contest
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Date: 10/15/2016 1:10:00 AM
you sway with this one, tim!... sweet congrats on your win!..huggs
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Date: 7/27/2016 7:03:00 PM
Such heartfelt emotion that colors this piece, this was soul stirring. Congratulaions!
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Date: 7/27/2016 2:07:00 AM
Congrats Tim, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/25/2016 4:57:00 PM
Tim,, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/15/2016 4:49:00 AM
What an emotional verse.... Congrats Tim, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/14/2016 2:19:00 PM
This one always melts the heart in the aftermath of losing the love of your life, dear Tim. I could read it again and again, my friend.
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Date: 7/14/2016 9:54:00 AM
Your poem brought tears to my eyes, Tim. So much I can identify with in your powerful poem. I pray you keep dancing for a long time. Congrats on your fine well-deserved podium win. 7+Fav Sandra
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Date: 7/13/2016 8:52:00 PM
A 7 for this poignant WINNING piece that touched me, Tim. Janice
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Date: 7/13/2016 7:53:00 PM
Tim! How exciting for me to see that this is your poem. It is so touching, really, I teared up... very beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/14/2016 2:24:00 PM
Thank you SO much Becca!
Date: 6/29/2016 9:04:00 AM
Congrats Tim, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/27/2016 11:31:00 AM
Beautiful dance in kitchen of life's beautiful memory. Beautifully expressed. A 7. Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/27/2016 10:18:00 AM
Tim, such a beautiful poem you wrote here, it moved me...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/27/2016 4:01:00 PM
Thank you SO much Laura!
Date: 12/17/2015 12:42:00 PM
TIM, wonderful win. **SKAT**
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Date: 12/15/2015 3:57:00 PM
Tim,Thanks for participating in my contest. Congrats on your 1st place win! :-) Alexis
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Date: 11/4/2015 12:26:00 AM
Lovely write, Tim, and the song gives it a nice sense of time and place. Well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 11/3/2015 5:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this truly superb poem!
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Date: 11/3/2015 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Tim. Amazing emotions in the loss of sweet love that gave me goosebumps. Sandra
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Date: 11/3/2015 1:03:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your Any Sad Poem win. LOVE **SKAT**
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Date: 11/3/2015 1:57:00 AM
Congrats on ur win Tim with this wonderful write!
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Date: 10/17/2014 12:35:00 PM
For Love speaks out so quietly In the need to share.
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Date: 10/16/2014 8:58:00 AM
It is nice to see this super one on the winning list,congrats Tim.
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Date: 10/16/2014 5:55:00 AM
Nice flow of expressions, Tim, congrats
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Date: 10/16/2014 4:33:00 AM
many congrats on your win it is great to read poems I have previously not read:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/15/2014 11:51:00 PM
No bad writers in this contest! You were fast, furious, humorous, romantic,lost, found, sought after, wondrous! THANKS FOR ENTERING! I'M HAPPY!
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