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Wave of Solace

Slitting my eyes from a world pining for a refuge where the wave of solace touches hours' depth in celtic notes, I turn into gentle bones fluid and chaste… my illumined flames taste the potion of air while an inner self watches a breath climb tenderly, kindling my womanhood incense, jasmine, and myrrh. Heavy chains jut out from my skin melting like translucent powder where river and sky beg a chime : they inhabit each other, tasting the quietude of mellow stars in an outer world these eyes cannot reach. My cells, my being , my every heave release the kiln of soft fire, as ivory light comes “to flow out across the mother of all waters,” gently tapping my pulse “to lose myself on the black and silky currents”… my hand blossoms in quiet meditation, until I become a white evening woman balancing myself between two pelvic walls. ....................... Contest:The Colors Black And White of Laura Loo ~inspiration from poet Mary Oliver’s lines in “ White Night” Resubmitted 2/18/2017

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Date: 2/26/2017 6:40:00 PM
Very deep, Nette...also incredible images. Many congrats on win. Great writing! Elaine
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Date: 2/22/2017 1:21:00 PM
Superb!
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Nette! :-)
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Date: 6/26/2014 6:59:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest, nette. As usual, your words and images blew me away! This is stunning all the way through. I couldn't place it higher because it had your name on it. You are one of my favorite poets and I couldn't be sure I was scoring your poem impartially or because of my great respect for you as a poet.
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Date: 6/23/2014 4:55:00 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 6/22/2014 12:53:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win!!!! A truly beautiful write my friend!!!!!
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Date: 6/21/2014 10:40:00 PM
another wonderful win...PD
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Date: 6/20/2014 11:06:00 PM
Congratulation on a great win on the theme of Letters to poet, nette
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Date: 6/20/2014 7:35:00 PM
Another beautiful write, Nette! The imagery is fantastic. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Best wishes.
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Date: 6/7/2014 4:10:00 PM
A fantastic poem with such metaphoric depth in it dear Nette.I missed you and ps too.Was on holiday..Hopefully I ll be able to.catch up again ..where I left few days ago..Have a great Weekend.
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Date: 6/5/2014 3:06:00 PM
nette, your poem is wonderful as usual, best of luck in the contest, I received your comment and the correction is made.
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Date: 6/5/2014 1:55:00 PM
A lovely well written piece that allows the reader to image as they see. A joy to read this wet miserable evening in my 'Highlands' <*> James :)
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Date: 6/5/2014 10:54:00 AM
Oh you are not just a pretty face are you? this is both inspiring and amazing nette,, truly wonderful poetry
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Date: 6/5/2014 8:22:00 AM
Interesting work..Not familiar with this poet..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 6/4/2014 8:05:00 PM
WOW, excellent one for what surely must be a free verse poetess. Yes, I too have learned to love the modern free verse form. Fortunately my love for rhyme broadened to include short oriental forms and so many other marvelous types of poetry over the years!
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Date: 6/4/2014 5:19:00 PM
It is enriching to read a poem that is imbued with the profound sense of solace and reflection. Transcendental in content and ' fluid'. Mary Oliver is cheering; I read a few of her works; you mirrored her spirituality very well.
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