Wave of Solace

In stillness of evening when lull and hush invite a holy ritual, My cells, my being , my every heave release the kiln of soft fire, as ivory light comes “to flow out across the mother of all waters,” gently tapping my pulse “to lose myself on the black and silky currents”… my hand blossoms in quiet meditation, until I become a white evening woman balancing myself between two pelvic walls. ....................... Contest:The Colors Black And White of Laura Loo ~inspiration from poet Mary Oliver’s lines in “ White Night” Resubmitted 2/18/2017
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George   Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 6:40 PM
Very deep, Nette...also incredible images. Many congrats on win. Great writing! Elaine
Roberts Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 1:21 PM
Superb!
Martin Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 12:32 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Nette! :-)
Sirak Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 6:59 AM
Thank you for entering my contest, nette. As usual, your words and images blew me away! This is stunning all the way through. I couldn't place it higher because it had your name on it. You are one of my favorite poets and I couldn't be sure I was scoring your poem impartially or because of my great respect for you as a poet.
Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 4:55 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
Lindley Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 12:53 PM
Congrats on a fine win!!!! A truly beautiful write my friend!!!!!
A   Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 10:40 PM
another wonderful win...PD
Mehta Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 11:06 PM
Congratulation on a great win on the theme of Letters to poet, nette
Sietesantos Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 7:35 PM
Another beautiful write, Nette! The imagery is fantastic. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Best wishes.
Chircop Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 4:10 PM
A fantastic poem with such metaphoric depth in it dear Nette.I missed you and ps too.Was on holiday..Hopefully I ll be able to.catch up again ..where I left few days ago..Have a great Weekend.
La France Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 3:06 PM
nette, your poem is wonderful as usual, best of luck in the contest, I received your comment and the correction is made.
Fraser Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 1:55 PM
A lovely well written piece that allows the reader to image as they see. A joy to read this wet miserable evening in my 'Highlands' <*> James :)
Horsman Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 10:54 AM
Oh you are not just a pretty face are you? this is both inspiring and amazing nette,, truly wonderful poetry
Kendrick Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 8:22 AM
Interesting work..Not familiar with this poet..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 8:05 PM
WOW, excellent one for what surely must be a free verse poetess. Yes, I too have learned to love the modern free verse form. Fortunately my love for rhyme broadened to include short oriental forms and so many other marvelous types of poetry over the years!
Arana Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 5:19 PM
It is enriching to read a poem that is imbued with the profound sense of solace and reflection. Transcendental in content and ' fluid'. Mary Oliver is cheering; I read a few of her works; you mirrored her spirituality very well.
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