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Waterfall

waterfall cascades over cliff to pool below ....rainbows in the mist

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/8/2011 4:03:00 PM

Did I read this one before? Nevertheless, this has your usual great descriptiveness. A quality haiku.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/17/2010 1:25:00 AM

Hi Francine :) That last line sure gave so much hope in my opinion :) Could picture this haiku in my mind :) very very nice :) -- nikko :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/16/2010 9:46:00 PM

A beautiful image Francine.. Good luck with this gem.. Thank you for the compliment with regards to my pic on FB you made me smile.. And yep you are right it is nice to have a face to add to the poetry ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2010 8:54:00 PM

Painting a lovely picture here, Francine!

Paul James

Date: 12/15/2010 1:00:00 AM

I really liked this, I am wondering if this is a kind of synaesthesia...? Beautifully evocative. Thanks, by the way, for your comments in response to my blog. They were very much appreciated.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/14/2010 7:40:00 PM

enjoyed this Francine, very profound. Harry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/14/2010 3:59:00 PM

So descriptive that I can see the scene..This will be followed by success for sure..Sara

James Fraser

Date: 12/14/2010 3:50:00 PM

Beautiful sights these rainbows in the mist Francine, good luck in the contest with this little beauty >> James :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/14/2010 12:44:00 PM

Luv this one Francine especially your last line ..good luck in the contest ... a rare beauty ... enjoyed with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/14/2010 12:10:00 PM

Brilliant images of the colors dancing off the cascading waterfall, Francine!! A wonderful haiku for Rick's contest. Wishing you success, Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/14/2010 6:46:00 AM

AHHHH Francine you have also cascaded beautiful images across my screen...lovely write...luv Michael

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/14/2010 6:37:00 AM

Beautiful image..good luck in the contest..it should do well. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/14/2010 3:35:00 AM

Perfect haiku on waterfall with great images, Francine