Waterfall

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whitewater appeared a rumbling roar filled the air near the waterfall

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/23/2023 4:23:00 AM

Good Morning Bill. Hi. Wonderful imagery scene and moment. You grace us with a feel good feeling to be felt and seen too. Thank you as always for sharing your poetic talent. May you and Sara have a wonderful morning and day. Peace and Blessings to you both. (smile)

Bill Baker
Date: 10/23/2023 8:51:00 AM

Thank you, my sweet friend, for the kindness and joy you spread here on Poetry Soup. Your presence is a blessing to this site. Sara and I, both appreciate your thoughtfulness and kind comments. Hugs from us both, Bill

Jay Narain

Date: 10/19/2023 11:38:00 AM

Nice haiku. Portrays the waterfall well.

Bill Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 5:24:00 PM

Thanks, Jay. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/19/2023 3:17:00 AM

awesome Haiku, Bill! In a few short lines you've captured the sound of those magnificent waterfalls. They are truly awesome to see and hear. Well done, westside writing bear, hugs, me

Bill Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 5:24:00 PM

You're a real treat my sweet. Thanks for the visit. Hugs, Bill

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/19/2023 1:42:00 AM

I love waterfalls. Great haiku.

Bill Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 5:26:00 PM

Me too, Victor. My fantasy dreams always have waterfalls in them. :-) They're so peaceful in spite of their tremendous power. Thanks for the visit and comments, my friend. Bill