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Watcher

Watcher from the barren trees of winter to the golden warmth of autumn leaves I am but a forlorn watcher gazing through a window afraid to venture out yet allowing myself to imagine nature’s beauty be they lonely country roads or cities bustling with people an agoraphobic woman, I retreat from both participation eludes me as I stare at the world outside wary of mingling with nature or society still dreaming of how my life might change if I could but open the door but I remain a watcher trapped inside my home waiting for an invitation from a friendly stranger who will open his arms to me *Written May 14, 2014

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Date: 5/26/2014 7:07:00 AM
carolyn, your imagery and depth of emotion were wonderful... sweet congrats on your win and huggs
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Date: 5/24/2014 7:29:00 PM
Thank goodness I KNOW this is now YOU, you see & have seen & will see much of the world! Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 5/23/2014 9:30:00 AM
Beautiful win Carolyn, simply so graceful and truthful --- have to fave this! Love always~ Keith
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Date: 5/23/2014 6:46:00 AM
Congrats Carolyn....I enjoyed your words....Seren
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Date: 5/23/2014 6:04:00 AM
Yes! There are those who can only watch through the window. Looking at the picture for the contest - wen you look into her eyes, your can see this is truly what she might be thinking. Wonderful insight you have, Carolyn. Many congrats on your win. Lainie
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Date: 5/22/2014 9:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win Carolyn...very interesting topic....
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Date: 5/22/2014 2:33:00 PM
this really takes creativity to a new level - i would never have dreamed of writing about this condition - you inspire me! Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 5/17/2014 3:05:00 PM
Another beautiful and expressive write, Carolyn. I read it all over once more just for the joy of tasting each word again. Pity those who are afraid of open spaces...but maybe they will find a remedy in the open arms of someone who loves and understands. // paul
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Date: 5/15/2014 6:21:00 AM
Expressive work about the condition..That would be a terrible illness with which to have to contend..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2014 6:33:00 PM
WOW!
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