Watcher

Watcher

from the barren trees of winter
to the golden warmth of autumn leaves
I am but a forlorn watcher
gazing through a window 
afraid to venture out
yet allowing myself to imagine
nature’s beauty

be they lonely country roads
or cities bustling with people
an agoraphobic woman, I retreat from both

participation eludes me
as I stare at the world outside
wary of mingling with nature or society
still dreaming of how my life might change
if I could but open the door

but I remain a watcher
trapped inside my home
waiting for an invitation
from a friendly stranger
who will open his arms to me


*Written May 14, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Onclaud Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 7:07 AM
carolyn, your imagery and depth of emotion were wonderful... sweet congrats on your win and huggs
Guzzi Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 7:29 PM
Thank goodness I KNOW this is now YOU, you see & have seen & will see much of the world! Congrad's on your win Light & Love
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:30 AM
Beautiful win Carolyn, simply so graceful and truthful --- have to fave this! Love always~ Keith
Roberts Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 6:46 AM
Congrats Carolyn....I enjoyed your words....Seren
George   Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 6:04 AM
Yes! There are those who can only watch through the window. Looking at the picture for the contest - wen you look into her eyes, your can see this is truly what she might be thinking. Wonderful insight you have, Carolyn. Many congrats on your win. Lainie
May Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 9:36 PM
Congrats on your win Carolyn...very interesting topic....
Allison Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 2:33 PM
this really takes creativity to a new level - i would never have dreamed of writing about this condition - you inspire me! Hugs Jan xxx
Callus Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 3:05 PM
Another beautiful and expressive write, Carolyn. I read it all over once more just for the joy of tasting each word again. Pity those who are afraid of open spaces...but maybe they will find a remedy in the open arms of someone who loves and understands. // paul
Kendrick Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:21 AM
Expressive work about the condition..That would be a terrible illness with which to have to contend..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visit..Sara
Halliday Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 6:33 PM
WOW!
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