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"War of the Worlds" by H.G. (Hebert-Gautreaux) Wells

Martian Gumbo One of dem Saucer land in da Bayou Ole Boudreaux out huntin say "Jus who be you?" Den he point him shodgun And say "Lookee here son... Jus found some green OKRA to seasonne my stew!"

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Date: 5/18/2010 4:28:00 PM
You are one funny man! I hope all is well with you? Light & Love cher
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Date: 4/10/2010 5:53:00 AM
congrats! Tim! delicious fun! jimbo
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Date: 3/23/2010 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations Tim, on your win in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire, with this funny limerick. I’m doubling over with laughter! I must say, it is a fun way to start the day. Laughingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/22/2010 8:02:00 AM
Haha`Jus who be you` good one- Congrats Jim
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Date: 3/21/2010 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations Tim on your much deserved win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/21/2010 7:27:00 AM
If you "guessed" Dane Ann, you were right! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/20/2010 10:17:00 AM
very funny and I like the talk. congrats to you Tim!-Robert
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Date: 3/20/2010 5:56:00 AM
All the plaudits are deserved Tim great write Daniel
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Date: 3/19/2010 7:18:00 PM
Congrats Tim on your winning poem and placement in the Limerick contest.. a great write and awesome win for u to so enjoy.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/19/2010 5:07:00 PM
This is really funny. I like it. Congratulations on your win. Joyce
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Date: 3/19/2010 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations Tim on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James
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Date: 3/19/2010 10:25:00 AM
Enjoyed the Redneck humor very much, Tim! Congrats on your success in my contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/18/2010 7:33:00 AM
Cool limerick, Tim. And a great concept writing of the bayou folks and their gumbo. Very funny! by the way, my hair does not grow very fast and I had to cut it all off when bleach destroyed my hair from coloring it several years. I LOVEd being blonde, and long or short, I wouldn't mind magic beans just to make it STAY blonde without ruining my hair! LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/17/2010 11:41:00 PM
A very funny take on the limerick..off to my favs. BG
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Date: 3/17/2010 5:54:00 PM
Lol !! Love the Bayou "twang" that speaks for your hunters!! This one made me laugh Tim! (Don't you love that old version if the movie best (with Gene Barry) ....?? I remember it was such a hit when I was school-age ...it really scared us as kids!! :)
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Date: 3/17/2010 5:46:00 PM
Got a little chuckle here.Keep writing the cheer.Sara
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