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Walking With Sorrow

I walk with sorrow, as distant noise from crows and mourning doves, are heard in the mist of dawn, Nature's breath slowly rises, hanging above a path of fallen leaves My hands rest on layered cold stones a slave wall stretching for miles The voices of agony released in mumbled tones, drift through my head as I stare in silence The sound of leaves crunching beneath my feet, feels like an intrusion with each step I take, back into a time I'll never understand Rotting trees crushed the wall where they fell, giving a false sense of peace A coat of Serenity worn by shadowed death from a time of whips and chains allow ghostly figures to haunt this place appearing and disappearing floating in the hollow of the mind as though still pulling stones from the ground with blood covered fingers leaving a stain as they piled one upon another growing the wall longer each day and night Now, crumbled ruins lost to memory Only crows and doves stand guard their haunting calls cascading over blood stain stones crying out in sorrow 2/17/17

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Date: 3/23/2017 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations, Frederic, on your win… ~*
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Date: 3/22/2017 8:33:00 AM
Congrats Frederic, for your WIN with this beautiful piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/21/2017 7:36:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, well chosen words, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 2/26/2017 6:30:00 PM
Incredible images of black and white, Frederic.Many congrats on your top-notch win. Great writing! Elaine
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Date: 2/22/2017 1:35:00 PM
Wonderful, congratulations...
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Date: 2/22/2017 1:22:00 PM
Emotional take on black and white. Wonder how many works of slaves still stand in the world. Congratulations on your win. Frederic. :-)
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Date: 2/19/2017 1:40:00 PM
- A powerful and melancholy black and white writing, Frederic - Well done, you create a great picture - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/18/2017 10:47:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, I felt these words, each and every one!
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Date: 2/17/2017 8:22:00 PM
Sad and haunting, Frederic - interesting take on the b&w prompt. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/17/2017 4:14:00 PM
Frederic, this was so cool. It's haunting theme takes us to a dark place where blood was spilled and screams were the foggy swept melody on the air, but the way you ended this was the best part. I had no idea this was written for that contest and when that last line hit me, I knew it was perfect. Good luck my friend.
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