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Walking In Sunshine - Carousel In Roundel Contest

Walking in sunshine, along life's highway, Smiling with happiness feeling just fine. Music fills my soul I am loving this day Walking in sunshine A carousel awaits me, horses look fine, The music making me dream a lovers play, Twisting my hair until my face meets thine, Riding together, our bodies sway Happiness prevails in this heart of mine, Where is the lover my dreams portray, Walking in sunshine. Contest: Carousel in Roundel Penned by Seren Roberts. On 16 August 2013

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Skat A

Date: 8/20/2013 9:01:00 PM

beautiful... congrats in the CAROUSEL IN ROUNDEL contest... SKAT

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/20/2013 9:51:00 PM

Thank you SKAT.....Seren

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/20/2013 4:44:00 PM

Oh boy, I love this one. I would have placed it much higher. BG

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/20/2013 6:34:00 PM

Thank you BG....Seren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2013 4:27:00 PM

Great winning work..Enjoyed reading it today..Congrats...Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/20/2013 6:34:00 PM

Thank you Sara ...Seren

Kash Poet

Date: 8/20/2013 1:34:00 PM

I love your approach here Seren.Beautiful poem.Congrats on the win.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/20/2013 6:36:00 PM

Thnk you Ash ... Seren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/20/2013 8:32:00 AM

I enjoyed the walk, congratulations.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/20/2013 6:39:00 PM

Hi Richard thans for calling by ... Seren

Tahera Mannan

Date: 8/19/2013 10:56:00 PM

Many congrats on your win. A wonderful write.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/20/2013 6:41:00 PM

Many thanks Tahera, ....Seren

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/19/2013 7:47:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Morgan

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/20/2013 6:39:00 PM

Tnank u Morgan

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2013 4:42:00 PM

Seren, Thanks for the wonderful "CAROUSEL" ride.... Congratulations with your winning poem in Nette's contest. always & forever *PD :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2013 3:07:00 PM

Way to go, Seren. it was a cute poem that you did. Congrats for your win. BTW, I haven't got time yet to see the thing you soupmailed me about. Maybe I will go do that right now!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/17/2013 4:28:00 AM

I like it Seren will soup mail you Shadow x smiles

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/17/2013 3:46:00 PM

Ok thx

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/16/2013 11:01:00 PM

You have written a tremendous write my friend! You have done an excellent Roundel, and have written the content very well! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/16/2013 7:31:00 AM

Seren you took me there gl in contest Shadow x smiles

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/17/2013 3:47:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed your journey ..seren