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Wahine Grannie

Flat on her stomach Grannie rode
her adrenalin overflowed 
	she went in style 
	with a big smile
into the paddle battle she flowed

The heart of an ancient wahine
she called her personal genie
	a goofy foot true
	she already knew
she’d forgotten her bikini

Grannie won the right of way
a righteous spot they all say
	her stick’s outline
	her own design
shaper champion this day

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/23/2022 6:54:00 AM

Congratulations on the win, Linda. Wonderful surfer language for this one. A well deserved win. Surf On! Bill

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/23/2022 7:36:00 AM

Many thanks Bill! Linda

Eve Roper

Date: 7/22/2022 8:55:00 AM

Cute Limerick, Linda, congratulations on your win. Many Blessing

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/22/2022 9:04:00 AM

Many thanks Eve! I appreciate your visit and comment. Linda

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/20/2022 12:58:00 PM

She's still got it Linda lol. Congratulations on your win. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/20/2022 1:10:00 PM

Many thanks Tom. It's always a pleasure to have you visit and comment. All is well here (albeit on the warmish side!) :). I trust the same with you. Linda

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/20/2022 6:37:00 AM

Wonderful granny. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/20/2022 7:53:00 AM

Hello! :) Very nice to meet you. Thanks for the complimentary comment and for your time to visit. Linda

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/19/2022 10:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a cute write. Your granny in a bikini??? Did you take pictures??? Hahaha Have a great/blessed day..................

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/19/2022 4:54:00 PM

Hi Paula. Thanks for stopping by with comments on my grannie. Wish I had had a camera :)) Linda

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/19/2022 9:50:00 AM

What a funny creative limerick, it tickles my funny bone, congrats on your 2nd place in, Thoroughly enjoyed your poem dear Linda :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/19/2022 4:53:00 PM

Oh so many thanks my friend. I am tickled you enjoyed it and appreciate your visit and comments. ;) hugs, Linda

Terry Flood

Date: 7/19/2022 6:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your deserved (ahem ‘joint’) win, Linda. Great minds think alike eh? Yours had no bikini, mine had no bloomers. Well done. Terry

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/19/2022 6:21:00 AM

teehee! Many thanks Terry. In my mind, you are first and I am second. :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/19/2022 4:57:00 AM

A fun and humorous write, Linda Congratulatiions. on your top placement. Best, SuZ

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/19/2022 5:51:00 AM

Hi SuZ! Thanks for stopping by with congrats! Linda

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/19/2022 4:36:00 AM

Congrats on your winning limericks, Linda. I wish the sponsor had made it clear that we could write more than one. She stated 'a' limerick. Yours were well done.