Linda Alice Fowler Poet Limerick

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Wahine Grannie

Flat on her stomach Grannie rode
her adrenalin overflowed 
	she went in style 
	with a big smile
into the paddle battle she flowed

The heart of an ancient wahine
she called her personal genie
	a goofy foot true
	she already knew
she’d forgotten her bikini

Grannie won the right of way
a righteous spot they all say
	her stick’s outline
	her own design
shaper champion this day

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Bill Baker July 23, 2022 at 6:54 AM Congratulations on the win, Linda. Wonderful surfer language for this one. A well deserved win. Surf On! Bill Linda Alice Fowler July 23, 2022 at 7:36 AM Many thanks Bill! Linda

Eve Roper July 22, 2022 at 8:55 AM Cute Limerick, Linda, congratulations on your win. Many Blessing Linda Alice Fowler July 22, 2022 at 9:04 AM Many thanks Eve! I appreciate your visit and comment. Linda

Tom Cunningham July 20, 2022 at 12:58 PM She's still got it Linda lol. Congratulations on your win. Hope your week is going well. Tom Linda Alice Fowler July 20, 2022 at 1:10 PM Many thanks Tom. It's always a pleasure to have you visit and comment. All is well here (albeit on the warmish side!) :). I trust the same with you. Linda

Christuraj Alex July 20, 2022 at 6:37 AM Wonderful granny. Congratulations! Linda Alice Fowler July 20, 2022 at 7:53 AM Hello! :) Very nice to meet you. Thanks for the complimentary comment and for your time to visit. Linda

Paula Goldsmith July 19, 2022 at 10:40 AM Congratulations on your win.  What a cute write. Your granny in a bikini??? Did you take pictures??? Hahaha  Have a great/blessed day.................. Linda Alice Fowler July 19, 2022 at 4:54 PM Hi Paula. Thanks for stopping by with comments on my grannie. Wish I had had a camera :)) Linda

Mystic Rose Rose July 19, 2022 at 9:50 AM What a funny creative limerick, it tickles my funny bone, congrats on your 2nd place in, Thoroughly enjoyed your poem dear Linda :) Linda Alice Fowler July 19, 2022 at 4:53 PM Oh so many thanks my friend. I am tickled you enjoyed it and appreciate your visit and comments. ;) hugs, Linda

Terry Flood July 19, 2022 at 6:00 AM Congratulations on your deserved (ahem ‘joint’) win, Linda. Great minds think alike eh? Yours had no bikini, mine had no bloomers. Well done. Terry Linda Alice Fowler July 19, 2022 at 6:21 AM teehee! Many thanks Terry. In my mind, you are first and I am second. :)

Suzanne Delaney July 19, 2022 at 4:57 AM A fun and humorous write, Linda Congratulatiions. on your top placement. Best, SuZ Linda Alice Fowler July 19, 2022 at 5:51 AM Hi SuZ! Thanks for stopping by with congrats! Linda

Jenna Logan July 19, 2022 at 4:36 AM Congrats on your winning limericks, Linda. I wish the sponsor had made it clear that we could write more than one. She stated 'a' limerick. Yours were well done.

Kim Rodrigues July 19, 2022 at 4:08 AM The heart of an ancient wahine…congratulations! Linda Alice Fowler July 19, 2022 at 5:50 AM Oh so many thanks Kim! Linda

Beata Agustin July 18, 2022 at 9:43 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me giggle... God bless you. Linda Alice Fowler July 19, 2022 at 5:50 AM Glad you got a giggle Beata. hugs, Linda

I Am Anaya July 18, 2022 at 5:51 PM I love your surf'n grannie! This makes me smile, Linda :) Great limerick! ~Anaya Linda Alice Fowler July 18, 2022 at 7:07 PM Oh so many thanks Anaya. I'm glad it bought a smile :) Linda

Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2022 at 12:16 PM fun humor, loved the part where she had no bikini Linda Alice Fowler July 18, 2022 at 6:10 AM A bit of fun is always welcome. Thanks for the visit and comments Andrea. You're always welcome here! :) Linda

Gershon Wolf July 16, 2022 at 8:50 PM I think I dreamed of this wahine... Isn't her name 'Jeannie?!' Linda Alice Fowler July 17, 2022 at 6:03 AM LOL gw! Linda

Jeff Kyser July 16, 2022 at 9:53 AM Lisa’s got her work cut out for her, nice! Linda Alice Fowler July 16, 2022 at 10:00 AM Thank you Jeff! Yes, so many great entries...a tough decision for her. Linda