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Flat on her stomach Grannie rode her adrenalin overflowed she went in style with a big smile into the paddle battle she flowed The heart of an ancient wahine she called her personal genie a goofy foot true she already knew she’d forgotten her bikini Grannie won the right of way a righteous spot they all say her stick’s outline her own design shaper champion this day

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Date: 7/23/2022 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Linda. Wonderful surfer language for this one. A well deserved win. Surf On! Bill
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/23/2022 7:36:00 AM
Many thanks Bill! Linda
Date: 7/22/2022 8:55:00 AM
Cute Limerick, Linda, congratulations on your win. Many Blessing
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/22/2022 9:04:00 AM
Many thanks Eve! I appreciate your visit and comment. Linda
Date: 7/20/2022 12:58:00 PM
She's still got it Linda lol. Congratulations on your win. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/20/2022 1:10:00 PM
Many thanks Tom. It's always a pleasure to have you visit and comment. All is well here (albeit on the warmish side!) :). I trust the same with you. Linda
Date: 7/20/2022 6:37:00 AM
Wonderful granny. Congratulations!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/20/2022 7:53:00 AM
Hello! :) Very nice to meet you. Thanks for the complimentary comment and for your time to visit. Linda
Date: 7/19/2022 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.  What a cute write. Your granny in a bikini??? Did you take pictures??? Hahaha  Have a great/blessed day..................
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/19/2022 4:54:00 PM
Hi Paula. Thanks for stopping by with comments on my grannie. Wish I had had a camera :)) Linda
Date: 7/19/2022 9:50:00 AM
What a funny creative limerick, it tickles my funny bone, congrats on your 2nd place in, Thoroughly enjoyed your poem dear Linda :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/19/2022 4:53:00 PM
Oh so many thanks my friend. I am tickled you enjoyed it and appreciate your visit and comments. ;) hugs, Linda
Date: 7/19/2022 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your deserved (ahem ‘joint’) win, Linda. Great minds think alike eh? Yours had no bikini, mine had no bloomers. Well done. Terry
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/19/2022 6:21:00 AM
teehee! Many thanks Terry. In my mind, you are first and I am second. :)
Date: 7/19/2022 4:57:00 AM
A fun and humorous write, Linda Congratulatiions. on your top placement. Best, SuZ
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/19/2022 5:51:00 AM
Hi SuZ! Thanks for stopping by with congrats! Linda
Date: 7/19/2022 4:36:00 AM
Congrats on your winning limericks, Linda. I wish the sponsor had made it clear that we could write more than one. She stated 'a' limerick. Yours were well done.
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Date: 7/19/2022 4:08:00 AM
The heart of an ancient wahine…congratulations!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/19/2022 5:50:00 AM
Oh so many thanks Kim! Linda
Date: 7/18/2022 9:43:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me giggle... God bless you.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/19/2022 5:50:00 AM
Glad you got a giggle Beata. hugs, Linda
Date: 7/18/2022 5:51:00 PM
I love your surf'n grannie! This makes me smile, Linda :) Great limerick! ~Anaya
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/18/2022 7:07:00 PM
Oh so many thanks Anaya. I'm glad it bought a smile :) Linda
Date: 7/17/2022 12:16:00 PM
fun humor, loved the part where she had no bikini
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/18/2022 6:10:00 AM
A bit of fun is always welcome. Thanks for the visit and comments Andrea. You're always welcome here! :) Linda
Date: 7/16/2022 8:50:00 PM
I think I dreamed of this wahine... Isn't her name 'Jeannie?!'
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/17/2022 6:03:00 AM
LOL gw! Linda
Date: 7/16/2022 9:53:00 AM
Lisa’s got her work cut out for her, nice!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/16/2022 10:00:00 AM
Thank you Jeff! Yes, so many great entries...a tough decision for her. Linda

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