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Voice On My Shoulder

Dogma deemed absurd, I fought scruple’s bird, 
its voice I still heard, but conscience was blurred.  
A peer-pressure nerd, the threat was the herd;
their counsel preferred, my standards deferred.
Accident incurred;  two bodies interred.
My mind I re-gird with thoughts from God’s Word.

written April 28, 2017
for John Hamilton's Rhymer's Delight, Internal Monorhyme Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Acrich Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Nice, I don't want to say to much since I don't want to B.S. You But I like poems that rhyme that my thing
Poteet Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 6:39 AM
Thanks for commenting. It has more rhyme than I prefer but for a contest, one adapts personal preference. Sorta of a fun write but a ver serious message to teens in particular.
Duet Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 11:07 PM
Heavy one, Reason. Congrats on your well-deserved placement in the contest.
Poteet Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 5:46 PM
I don't get that heavy often, Carole; but though it has never been a personal issue with me, peer pressure has been many a young person's plague. Thanks for the read and the nice comment.
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 3:25 PM
REason, you approached a serious topic with great word usage on internal rhyme. GREAT job and congrats for your win.
Poteet Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 5:47 PM
Thank you, Andrea, I value your comments and appreciate your time and energy in reading my work and making encouraging remarks. Have a great day and I appreciate you.
Hamilton Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 6:54 PM
Hi Reason enjoyed your rhymes, thanks for your entry, congrats on a fine placement!
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May 1, 2017 at 12:51 AM
thanks, John, so worth this poet's write. Thanks for a great prompt and for a welcome placement. You are kind.
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April 29, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Thanks, Jo, have a great day wallowing in poetry.
Daniel Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 8:59 AM
A nice one, Reason:) all the best:)
Poteet Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 9:56 AM
Thanks, Jo, have a great day wallowing in poetry.
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