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Virgin Love

I long to feel the love you had for me When you disrobed me as a blushing bride Your every touch of hand brought ecstasy So eager was your tongue on lips to slide I shivered with delight as though in dream My heart and soul inviting you inside Each moment an eternity did seem My virgin robe of red dismantled then As tears of wonder from my eyes did stream You held me close then touched me yet again A woman now, my body all aglow To this our prayer of love a sweet amen Tonight I lie in bed, embraced by shame The fire of your virgin love is tame. July 22, 2013 For Craig Cornish’s Contest Terza Rima

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Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/12/2013 1:28:00 AM

wow! I can only imagine, Such bliss i can only wonder, untouched and waiting, For an experience like this to happen! Congrats you truly 100% deserve this win!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/29/2013 12:56:00 AM

Danesh....WOW! What a wonderful and generous post, my dear. Thanks ever so much for your love! :)

Richard D Seal

Date: 8/11/2013 4:54:00 PM

Well, you got your good win as desired Auntie, Congratulations, as you can see I've just got round to looking at contest winners and surprise-surprise you're there lol. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/29/2013 12:57:00 AM

Thank you, Mr Seal....I'm glad you too the time to look at the WINNERS! HA HA! I couldn't NOT say that! :) Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2013 1:29:00 PM

Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/9/2013 8:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your well earned win. Love, Joyce

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/9/2013 9:07:00 PM

Thanks, Joyce! So kind of you to stop by! :)

Skat A

Date: 8/9/2013 7:02:00 PM

a sweet win...SKAT

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/9/2013 9:08:00 PM

Thanks ever so much, SKAT....sweet is the word!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/9/2013 6:41:00 PM

Just perfect Eileen, congratulations.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/9/2013 9:08:00 PM

Thanks, Richard....you are a well of support and inspiration!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2013 4:29:00 PM

Hey, my fellow virgo. Awesome. one, Eileen. Glad to see this one high on the winners' list. Congratulations.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/9/2013 9:07:00 PM

Thanks ever so much, Andrea.....I'm ecstatic myself! :) Hugs

Richard D Seal

Date: 7/22/2013 1:12:00 PM

Do you think he's going off you Eileen lol. All fires burn out eventually unless you keep stoking em. Very well expressed in this write, Good luck in this contest. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/22/2013 1:18:00 PM

Hmmmmmm.....yes, you are right. Fires do need stoking...I like to think I'm a pretty good stoker...so...thanks for the visit, Richard....Yea...to be honest....I wouldn't mind a good win! :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/22/2013 7:40:00 AM

Drake and Richard...Please forgive my mixed up answers....It's probably because I was posting my Drug of Choice poem and I was high! ;) Thanks for understanding....

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/22/2013 7:47:00 AM

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!! I'm dying here!!!! DRAKE??? I SWEAR....I KEEP GOING TO YOUR REPLY AND IT GOES TO RICHARD....HONEST....I won't try again. I'm laughing so hard my belly is jiggling along with the lap top.....

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/22/2013 7:26:00 AM

Tonight I lie with the shame I've come to know "The fire of your virgin love is tame."

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/22/2013 7:45:00 AM

OOOOPPPPSSSS....sorry, Drake...How I love it when you say that word! HA HA! In this case...a sign of pleasure....I'm smoldering...what can I do? I mean...in the fire will NOT go out completely as long as there are some smoldering embers, eh? Thanks for reading and your patience with these mixed up posts. Dear Dear....HAHAHAHAHAHA! Seriously...What the heck????? I must be REALLY HIGH!!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/22/2013 7:43:00 AM

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/22/2013 7:41:00 AM

I'm SO SO sorry Richard....

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/22/2013 7:39:00 AM

OOOOPPPPSSSS....sorry, Drake...How I love it when you say that word! HA HA! In this case...a sign of pleasure....I'm smoldering...what can I do?

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/22/2013 7:30:00 AM

OOOOPPPPSSSS....sorry, Drake...How I love it when you say that word! HA HA! In this case...a sign of pleasure....I'm smoldering...what can I do?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/22/2013 7:28:00 AM

I went by the example in the form area. Is it not right??

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/22/2013 7:28:00 AM

Richard....I went back and double checked. The last two lines are a rhyme scheme of their own...FF...better go back and have a look and get back to me, ok?

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/22/2013 7:26:00 AM

Damn. A tame fire will quickly dissipate unless awoken from within. This poem was a true definition of a sensual reflection. The need is strong here.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/22/2013 7:29:00 AM

Well, I didn't go to the link...I followed the poem he gave as an example and the the rhyme pattern he gave.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/22/2013 7:23:00 AM

Excellent poem rework the last two lines to follow the form. The last two lines should not rhyme each other. The first line of the last stanza should rhyme with the second line of the previous stanza. I hope this helps.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/22/2013 7:26:00 AM

?????? Really? I checked Craig's rules...I thought that it was aba....bcb....cdc....ded....ff.....? I'm going back to double check. Glad you liked the content.