Eileen Manassian Poet Terza Rima

Virgin Love

I long to feel the love you had for me
When you disrobed me as a blushing bride
Your every touch of hand brought ecstasy

So eager was your tongue on lips to slide
I shivered with delight as though in dream
My heart and soul inviting you inside

Each moment an eternity did seem
My virgin robe of red dismantled then
As tears of wonder from my eyes did stream

You held me close then touched me yet again
A woman now, my body all aglow
To this our prayer of love a sweet amen

Tonight I lie in bed, embraced by shame
The fire of your virgin love is tame.

July 22, 2013
For Craig Cornish’s Contest
Terza Rima

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Danesh Morgan August 12, 2013 at 1:28 AM wow! I can only imagine, Such bliss i can only wonder, untouched and waiting, For an experience like this to happen! Congrats you truly 100% deserve this win! Eileen Manassian September 29, 2013 at 12:56 AM Danesh....WOW! What a wonderful and generous post, my dear. Thanks ever so much for your love! :)

Richard D Seal August 11, 2013 at 4:54 PM Well, you got your good win as desired Auntie, Congratulations, as you can see I've just got round to looking at contest winners and surprise-surprise you're there lol. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian September 29, 2013 at 12:57 AM Thank you, Mr Seal....I'm glad you too the time to look at the WINNERS! HA HA! I couldn't NOT say that! :) Hugs

Sara Kendrick August 11, 2013 at 1:29 PM Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara

Joyce Johnson August 9, 2013 at 8:27 PM Congratulations on your well earned win. Love, Joyce Eileen Manassian August 9, 2013 at 9:07 PM Thanks, Joyce! So kind of you to stop by! :)

Skat A August 9, 2013 at 7:02 PM a sweet win...SKAT Eileen Manassian August 9, 2013 at 9:08 PM Thanks ever so much, SKAT....sweet is the word!

Richard Lamoureux August 9, 2013 at 6:41 PM Just perfect Eileen, congratulations. Eileen Manassian August 9, 2013 at 9:08 PM Thanks, Richard....you are a well of support and inspiration!

Andrea Dietrich August 9, 2013 at 4:29 PM Hey, my fellow virgo. Awesome. one, Eileen. Glad to see this one high on the winners' list. Congratulations. Eileen Manassian August 9, 2013 at 9:07 PM Thanks ever so much, Andrea.....I'm ecstatic myself! :) Hugs

Richard D Seal July 22, 2013 at 1:12 PM Do you think he's going off you Eileen lol. All fires burn out eventually unless you keep stoking em. Very well expressed in this write, Good luck in this contest. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian July 22, 2013 at 1:18 PM Hmmmmmm.....yes, you are right. Fires do need stoking...I like to think I'm a pretty good stoker...so...thanks for the visit, Richard....Yea...to be honest....I wouldn't mind a good win! :)

Eileen Manassian July 22, 2013 at 7:40 AM Drake and Richard...Please forgive my mixed up answers....It's probably because I was posting my Drug of Choice poem and I was high! ;) Thanks for understanding.... Eileen Manassian July 22, 2013 at 7:47 AM HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!! I'm dying here!!!! DRAKE??? I SWEAR....I KEEP GOING TO YOUR REPLY AND IT GOES TO RICHARD....HONEST....I won't try again. I'm laughing so hard my belly is jiggling along with the lap top.....

Poet Tacito July 22, 2013 at 7:26 AM Damn. A tame fire will quickly dissipate unless awoken from within. This poem was a true definition of a sensual reflection. The need is strong here. Eileen Manassian July 22, 2013 at 7:29 AM Well, I didn't go to the link...I followed the poem he gave as an example and the the rhyme pattern he gave.

Richard Lamoureux July 22, 2013 at 7:26 AM Tonight I lie with the shame I've come to know "The fire of your virgin love is tame." Eileen Manassian July 22, 2013 at 7:45 AM OOOOPPPPSSSS....sorry, Drake...How I love it when you say that word! HA HA! In this case...a sign of pleasure....I'm smoldering...what can I do? I mean...in the fire will NOT go out completely as long as there are some smoldering embers, eh? Thanks for reading and your patience with these mixed up posts. Dear Dear....HAHAHAHAHAHA! Seriously...What the heck????? I must be REALLY HIGH!!!! Eileen Manassian July 22, 2013 at 7:43 AM OOOOPPPPSSSS....sorry, Drake...How I love it when you say that word! HA HA! In this case...a sign of pleasure....I'm smoldering...what can I do? I mean...in the fire will NOT go out completely as long as there are some smoldering embers, eh? Thanks for reading and your patience with these mixed up posts. Dear Dear.... Eileen Manassian July 22, 2013 at 7:41 AM I'm SO SO sorry Richard.... Eileen Manassian July 22, 2013 at 7:39 AM OOOOPPPPSSSS....sorry, Drake...How I love it when you say that word! HA HA! In this case...a sign of pleasure....I'm smoldering...what can I do? Eileen Manassian July 22, 2013 at 7:30 AM OOOOPPPPSSSS....sorry, Drake...How I love it when you say that word! HA HA! In this case...a sign of pleasure....I'm smoldering...what can I do? Richard Lamoureux July 22, 2013 at 7:28 AM I went by the example in the form area. Is it not right?? Eileen Manassian July 22, 2013 at 7:28 AM Richard....I went back and double checked. The last two lines are a rhyme scheme of their own...FF...better go back and have a look and get back to me, ok?

Richard Lamoureux July 22, 2013 at 7:23 AM Excellent poem rework the last two lines to follow the form. The last two lines should not rhyme each other. The first line of the last stanza should rhyme with the second line of the previous stanza. I hope this helps. Eileen Manassian July 22, 2013 at 7:26 AM ?????? Really? I checked Craig's rules...I thought that it was aba....bcb....cdc....ded....ff.....? I'm going back to double check. Glad you liked the content.