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Violin

"Daydreams, let the music play on as dreams come true." Quote by poet Beautiful young girl Listens to a violin playing As she embraces her loving instrument, Dreams of playing in an orchestra The soothing, warm, rich, clear, and relaxing sounds of the violin While in concerts discipline. The slow, dips, and peaks pitch sounds reverberate, As the bow dances around the strings and filtrates Playing SONG ESCALA - CHI MAI as it escapes An image of a couple unites, In her mine Listening to the violin play Waltzing with the soothing sound as it assembles As a floating feather touches down, On the veranda She is in her finest long flowing gown, He is in black tails, white ties and gloves, Under the splendor of the brightness full moon and stars. Listening to a violin playing As she embraces her loving instrument And dreams of the day she will be the one playing And waltz Under the splendor of the full brightness of the moon and stars. 4/20/2023
Rewrite 12/26/2014

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Date: 5/16/2023 3:37:00 PM
I wish I had been there to dance, my husband and I, under the stars, "Waltzing to her soothing sounds" "Under the splendor" What a lovely image. I can see why you won. Lovely, simply lovely.
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Date: 5/1/2023 11:37:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Well written.
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Date: 4/24/2023 5:01:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge. I love your quote too, congratulations. !
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Date: 4/23/2023 4:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest...Eve
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Date: 4/23/2023 1:55:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations on your winning poem, dear Eve :) - hugs
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Date: 4/22/2023 9:17:00 PM
"dreams of the day she will be the one playing" - A very beautifully imagined scenario. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2023 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/quote. Have a blessed weekend......
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Date: 4/22/2023 11:42:00 AM
This is an enchanting write Eve. I hummed along with the music. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/22/2023 10:11:00 AM
Hi Eve, I enjoyed the story you told highlighting the chosen word. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/21/2023 10:03:00 PM
You captured the beauty of the violin playing such a lovely song. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/21/2023 7:44:00 PM
What a beautiful picture you painted with your exquisite verse, Eve. Good luck with the contest, a winner for me. Take care, Shirley
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Date: 4/20/2023 3:39:00 PM
Hello Eve ,I feel for the girl wanting to play her violin in front of an audience that enjoys classical music. I hope she gets her wish. Enjoy your ewvening my friend. /Darlene\
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Date: 4/20/2023 3:28:00 PM
Enjoyed your beautiful poem, Dear Eve. To me, you have created a pure lyrical soothing music with your excellent choice of words! Best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 4/20/2023 11:18:00 AM
- I enjoy every line of this beautiful poem, Eve :) - All the best :) - hugs
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Date: 4/20/2023 10:38:00 AM
Eve, this is an lovely as a violin serenade in moonlight - a single pure voice singing. I love the relationship between the young girl her instrument and her dream! Best wishes for the contest! Easter season blessings.
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Date: 4/20/2023 8:51:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem Eve, Thank You for sharing.
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