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Village Evening

Scented breeze blows, gently still, Touching, as though, with no will; Just like our very maiden, Body and mind shy-laden...! Moon, in his full pride, rises, Fills each star with surprises; Lingering of sun-rays gone, Dusk sets in celestial-zone...! Changing her dress each minute, Sky turns enchantingly cute; Birds flying back toward nests, Put flies on their way to tests...! Grazing animals find sheds, Kids, cartoons-fixed lie on beds; Elders with hookahs, gossip, While kitten behind, milk-sip...! Women busy as on day, No schedule to play or pray; Humans and beasts sleep at night, Forgetting each day-time fight...! 24 March 2022

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Date: 3/26/2022 1:46:00 PM
Another new form to read, Thanks for writing in so many different forms, Christuraj. Again, I like the way you include so many different forms (nature, people, animals) and even different ages. I enjoyed your Jueju. Bill
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Date: 3/25/2022 5:34:00 AM
Truly a typical village scene in the evening... !Women are the only ones who do not have any rest !
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