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Velvet Nights






I love the way you melt into my eyes, And speak to me in fluency unheard, That says to me your lust is on the rise, My body and my mind by you quite stirred. Impassioned arms, we're craving hot embrace, And right before our yearning lips do kiss, Ignited heat of heartbeats face to face, We linger in this moment of pre-bliss. You take me o'er the moon my shooting star, To galaxies and realms our Milky Way, In velvet nights of endless repertoire, On astral planes besprinkled with risque. Exotic dance in swirls of ecstasy, That whirl us to new heights so breathlessly. Susan Ashley November 11, 2017 ------------------------------ ~ Second Place ~ Any Poem Won in a Contest in November (not from mine) - Poetry Contest Laura Loo - Sponsor ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~ Fifth Place ~ A November Premiere Contest 2017 Brian Strand - Sponsor

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Date: 4/14/2018 5:59:00 PM
wow Susan a scorcher of a sizzling sonnet!:-) hugs jan xx
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/14/2018 7:36:00 PM
Jan, your comments delight and uplift me. Thank you for the pleasure of your kind words and wonderful visit. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Date: 1/28/2018 5:41:00 PM
You have described the colors of passion perfectly.
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Date: 1/28/2018 9:24:00 PM
Thank you Richard for your awesome comment and for the delight of your visit - always a pleasure to see you. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 1/6/2018 7:01:00 PM
I am still discovering all of your lovely poems...I like this line, it's so divine, " In velvet nights of endless repertoire," I can imagine a full list of things to be done...All blessing to you Susan
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Date: 1/6/2018 7:36:00 PM
A honey do list :)) Good evening my dear friend Arturo! I'm so happy that you spent some time with this poem that is near and dear to my heart.. I treasure your wonderful thoughts and I thank you truly for your lovely comments and your heartwarming friendship.. Warmest wishes and blessings to you mon ami.. ~Susan
Date: 12/19/2017 4:38:00 PM
wow, so nice a sonnet and win with Brian too. Congrats to you on your recent win and also with Laura!
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Date: 12/19/2017 7:46:00 PM
Andrea, your presence and wonderful comments are always so welcomed. Thank you for your warm and wonderful words of encouragement and congrats.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 12/14/2017 10:25:00 PM
Definitely a sizzler! Beautifully spun :)
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Date: 12/15/2017 4:19:00 PM
Shadow, I relish your wonderful thoughts and it delights me to know you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your kind visit and lovely comment. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 12/6/2017 8:02:00 PM
Lovely. So romantic Susan. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/6/2017 8:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Jean for your wonderful visit and lovely and heartwarming comments and congrats. My warmest wishes to you.. ~Susan
Date: 12/4/2017 3:56:00 PM
Congratulations, Susan, this was and is a great write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/4/2017 4:23:00 PM
Thank you Eve for you beautiful comment. Your lovely words are heartwarming and deeply appreciated..Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 12/4/2017 8:11:00 AM
A stellar write Susan...Congrats on your win
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Date: 12/4/2017 3:01:00 PM
Joseph, thank you for your wonderful comment and your heartwarming congrats. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 12/4/2017 6:30:00 AM
beautiful sonnet sweet Susan! thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 12/4/2017 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Laura. It is truly an honor to receive such a fine placement in your contest. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Warmest holiday wishes to you.. Susan
Date: 11/26/2017 8:51:00 PM
Ain't love grand, belated congrad's and thanks for stopping by! Light & Love
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Date: 11/27/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thank you Debbie, for your kind words and warm congrats. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 11/21/2017 7:59:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful sonnet, Susan. Thank you for sharing. Sincerely, Elaine
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Date: 11/21/2017 8:17:00 AM
Elaine, thank you for your wonderful visit and for sharing your kind thoughts with me. I receive your lovely comment with a glad heart of appreciation and would like you to know that I admire your poetry greatly.. Warmest wishes to you.. ~Susan
Date: 11/19/2017 1:58:00 PM
I was enthralled from start to finish and especially so with the 2 closing lines. The flow and imagery are poetically and sensually ew la la. Hugs .. CayCay
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Date: 11/19/2017 8:04:00 PM
I'm so happy you enjoyed my poem CayCay. I really enjoyed creating this write.. thank you for your generously lovely comment and for your graceful presence that always makes me smile.. ~Susan
Date: 11/18/2017 4:57:00 PM
Well done, Susan. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/18/2017 5:53:00 PM
Thank you Line for your wonderful comment and warm words of congrats! ~Susan
Date: 11/18/2017 12:57:00 PM
Outstanding, Susan; I really enjoy your skill with presenting these images. Well done!
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Date: 11/18/2017 5:51:00 PM
Faye, thank you so very much for your wonderful visit and your lovely and encouraging words. Your beautiful comment is received with much appreciation and joy! ~Susan
Date: 11/17/2017 11:50:00 AM
Such a sensual sonnet, Susan! Grasshopper says: Cold shower cools hot body. This romantic poem packs some serious heat. Listening to "Echoes of Eternity" by Jazzmasters while reading this sassafras soulful poem is rhythmically perfect. Another mighty fine write. Love and joy always
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Date: 11/17/2017 10:04:00 PM
Lol! Grasshopper speaks the truth! Freddie, your presence on my poetry page is always charming. I'm thrilled you enjoyed my 'sassafras soulful' (love that description btw) poem. I'm glad it went well with your jazz, it sounds like the perfect union of delights..:) Thank you for your generously lovely comment and for your precious thoughts. Love and joy to you my friend! ~Susan
Date: 11/17/2017 7:55:00 AM
Hello Susan, Thanks for your recent comment on my latest sonnet. My spirit almost floated away as the words and imagery of your wondrous sonnet here formed a romantic and passionate word picture right before my very eyes. This is an example of true romantic poetry at its very best!! Congratulations on the contest!! But I do think your sonnet should've been the 1st Place selection. (My Opinion!!) I really enjoyed your sonnet very much. IT'S A FAVE TOO!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 11/17/2017 9:56:00 PM
Hello Gary, thank you for your generous appreciation for my poem. Your heartwarming words, your warm congrats and the fave are gratefully received with joy and a smile. Thank you, as well, for sharing your precious thoughts with me my friend, your opinion I hold in high regard. My warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 11/17/2017 2:19:00 AM
Congrats on being placed my dear friend Susan on a most romantic sensual write. You painted such erotic and sensual veiled images. I enjoyed it immensely. Maria xxx
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Date: 11/17/2017 2:22:00 PM
Maria, my dear friend, it is with such joy that I read your wonderful comment. Thank you for your pleasing visit, your lovely words of support and encouragement and your heartwarming congrats. Your shining presence is always appreciated.. Warmest wishes to you lovely lady.. ~Susan
Date: 11/16/2017 11:22:00 AM
Very well written love sonnet, Susan ... Love it ... Congratulations ...
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Date: 11/16/2017 8:20:00 PM
Probir, I so admire your graceful presence on my poetry page. Your kindness and heartwarming words are so appreciated. Thank you for your visit and treasured comment. My warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 11/16/2017 9:45:00 AM
Great sexual poem written in very good sonnet form. Nice job.
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Date: 11/16/2017 8:16:00 PM
Thank you Alfred for your wonderful visit and your lovely, uplifting comment. Your kindness is appreciated.. ~Susan
Date: 11/15/2017 3:30:00 PM
An impassioned sonnet which is lovely in content and shows technical ability. I see that it is a winner, Susan, and a worthy one too! Congratulations. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/15/2017 7:51:00 PM
Paul, thank you so very much for your truly wonderful and uplifting comment. Your kind visit and heartwarming words are greatly appreciated! ~Susan
Date: 11/15/2017 8:42:00 AM
Expressive ecstasy!
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Date: 11/15/2017 7:34:00 PM
Chuck, thank you for your appreciation and lovely comment. Pleased to make your acquaintance.. ~Susan
Date: 11/15/2017 7:20:00 AM
A beautifully written sonnet, Susan. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. T.J
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Date: 11/15/2017 8:33:00 PM
Teppo, your kind visit, heartwarming words and warm congrats are greatly appreciated.. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.. ~Susan
Date: 11/15/2017 4:24:00 AM
Susan, congrats on your win my friend. I enjoyed reading this again.
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Date: 11/15/2017 7:33:00 PM
John, thank you for your kind visit, your lovely words and your warm congrats! ~Susan
Date: 11/15/2017 12:05:00 AM
Wow...this is romantic poetry at its best Susan. Fantastic! Congratulations on your winning placement! : )
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Date: 11/15/2017 7:10:00 PM
Connie, your heartfelt words are so appreciated and I thank you for your visit, your lovely comment and your kindness! ~Susan
Date: 11/14/2017 6:38:00 PM
Swirls of ecstasy... My goodness woman, this is why I love you! :) Susan my dear, absolutely passionate and I love it! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 11/15/2017 7:09:00 PM
Akkina my lovely friend.. I'm thrilled with your enthusiastic response to my poem! Thank you for your wonderful visit and your awesome comment. I love you too woman!! :) Hugs and smiles and warmest wishes to you my friend!! ~Susan
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