Valentine Pay Day

What's with this February day
That makes people blow all of their pay
Whether female or males
It's just commercialised sales
When it can be saved for a rainy day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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K. Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 11:52 AM
I've had similar thoughts on this day too, James :D lol-- congrats on your win and happy to help :) thank you for your inspiring comments-- off to lala-land I go-- have a wonderful weekend :D -- nikko :)
Brown Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations James on your win in Francine's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 5:42 AM
Congratulations James on your win in Francine's contest ;)
George   Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 4:09 PM
Good one, James. Congrat's on your big win, Lainie
Freeman Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 8:56 AM
Congratulations James on your poem's worthy honor. Agape, Moses
Calhoun Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 8:12 AM
Hi James - Congratulations on your WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
Pettit Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 1:47 AM
Congratulations on winning with this fine entry.
Johnson Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 10:23 PM
But it does break up a weary month James. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 9:54 PM
Kind of a Scrooge for this day, I see. haha. But you got an excellent limerick out of it. Congratulations, James. Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 7:35 PM
Congrats James on your super special win in the Valentine Day contest... enjoy your top spot ...with luv..
Mannan Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 7:33 PM
Tons of congrats for this great win.
Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 7:18 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, James
Roberts Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 5:58 PM
congrats on your 6th place win in my Valentines day contest and thanks for your support
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January 22, 2011 at 5:42 PM
It may be a commercialized holiday, James, but ladies just love getting flowers and chocolates on Valentine's Day. I remember how good it felt. But don't "blow all of" you pay, a single rose from a loving heart says it all. Best wishes in the Valentine's contest, James. Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 1:48 PM
Yeah! But it gives me a good excuse to eat chocolates. Good one James. Elaine
Neels Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 12:24 PM
All I want is a hug and that doesn't cost anything hey? Great limerick James :)
Gorelick Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 6:29 AM
Oh you guys!..all we really want is the chocolate...haha..BG
Richards Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 5:43 PM
I think the same thing quite often !! :) Good one!!
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 4:24 PM
Be we all need chocolate...Enjoyed your work..If for a contest, good luck..Wait until after and get what is on sale if any...That would go over really well, right..Sara
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