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Valentine Dreams

Valiant suitor in pursuit; for a valentine he has on his mind, Aching to catch the eye of a lady sweet, fair and kind. Longing to impress, in his intentions, he must truly shine. Each day he yearns for a passioned filled fate, Notions fill his head, with dreams of their first date. Troubled briefly, that she would decline his advances; Inspired by February's hearts and flowers, he would take his chances. "Nothing ventured, nothing gained"; hoping his invitation would not be in vain. Evening comes, the table is set, the candles glow; dinner and dancing a perfect night for romancing.

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Date: 2/10/2022 2:03:00 AM
Nice ode to Valentine day Paulette..Delice
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/10/2022 12:03:00 PM
Do you think it sounds a bit like Mr. Darcy? LOL! :)Paulette
Date: 2/8/2022 8:14:00 PM
A night for romance. great write..
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/9/2022 8:45:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it. I was dreaming of that "Mr. Right"~ where ever he may be. LOL. :)Paulette
Date: 2/8/2022 4:14:00 AM
Beautiful acrostic. Hope the valiant suitor doesn’t get disappointed
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/9/2022 8:46:00 AM
Hi Eshe, glad you enjoyed it. I also hope neither of them were disappointed.....perhaps I need a sequel? Cheers, Paulette
Date: 2/5/2022 5:34:00 AM
Effortless acrostic, Paulette, honest, warm & understanding, how beautiful when hearts do merge!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/5/2022 1:57:00 PM
Hi Jim...thanks for stopping by to comment and glad you enjoyed this. I look forward to your Valentine's Day Poem! Blessings, Paulette
Date: 2/4/2022 7:54:00 PM
Hmmm, one can surely dream, Paulette, great acrostic:) it flows smoothly:)
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/5/2022 1:58:00 PM
Hi Jo, Glad you liked it~I imagine this is a man from a former period in time, cultured, proper and kind. Thanks for visiting my page. Paulette
Date: 2/4/2022 7:51:00 PM
oh I hope nothing but the best for a guy like this. Sounds like a real romantic. and a great poem on him.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/5/2022 2:05:00 PM
I do believe he is from another generation, cultured and knows how to treat a lady. I may have been dreaming of Mr. Darcy...LOL! Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 2/4/2022 7:12:00 PM
I like how you told this from the guy's point of view, and the lines flow together so smoothly, I didn't even realize it was an acrostic! I too hope the lady showed up~
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/4/2022 7:20:00 PM
Hi Michelle, thanks for stopping by with your encouraging comments. I want to believe she did show up; maybe there will be a sequel....LOL! :) Paulette
Date: 2/4/2022 2:46:00 PM
Skillfully presented Acrostic for the Valentine's Day tradition. Enjoyed your poem, Paulette. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/4/2022 7:21:00 PM
Once again, thank you. I find Acrostic pieces can be a challenge but a lot of fun. Glad you enjoyed it, I enjoyed imagining and writing it. Blessings,Paulette
Date: 2/4/2022 2:05:00 PM
Soon be Valentine’s Day, time flies…Delice
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/4/2022 7:22:00 PM
It certainly does....we just finished Christmas and here we are getting ready for hearts and flowers. :)Paulette
Date: 2/4/2022 1:47:00 PM
Such a beautifully romantic read. For sure, nothing ventured nothing gained. And even some losses, when deep friendship comes out of them, are to be treasured for a lifetime. Blessings, Joe.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/4/2022 7:24:00 PM
I think I see a bit of a romantic in you~the best way to enjoy life, as you said, there will be gains and losses; we take our chances and voila there is magic in the air. Blessings,Paulette
Date: 2/4/2022 11:29:00 AM
Hello Paulette, it does sound like a romantic evening. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/6/2022 11:59:00 AM
Hello Paulette, Yes that romance is in the air. Hugs. Darlene
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/4/2022 1:42:00 PM
Romance is in the air~thanks as always for stopping by. :) Paulette
Date: 2/4/2022 10:21:00 AM
Glad it is all set, get ready, Feb 14th, here they come. Enjoy the month
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/4/2022 10:25:00 AM
Yes, indeed it is~lots of passion! Thanks for stopping by. :) Paulette

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