Usone Presence

O occasionally human BE-ings get more than
N nature's gifts, even our thinking skills
E everyone melts into one: UsOne Presence
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Deo Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 12:46 PM
I am so thankful to you all for reading, and for Spirit-Communion in Jesus's shalom and Kingdom
Ricci Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 6:41 AM
Hello Anil - Hi. May we all become one with thinking seeing hearing all of it. May our opinions never divide us but I know it does can can but may we get past the negative and turn to the larger picture of unity and oneness. Through brevity you speak volumes. May this day find you well and safe now and always. How is everything going for you and those around you. (yes I know that may be an unfair question of course I do because for those who we have shelter water food and warmth we have everything...) Love and Blessings always. Shalom and Namaste always as well...Remain safe Anil.
Horsman Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 6:59 PM
Thinking skills do divide us? being born on the other side of the fence. Anil, and now i can see/feel both side hopefully becoming as one. One day?
DiMino Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Absolutely! Unity our Divine state -- Division, the human inclination. Well said. Joe.
Rose  Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 3:29 AM
Yes Nostradamus used to talk about the time belt of knowledge, we pluck the info from its place of origin, nicely penned dear poet.
Brown Avatar
February 6, 2022 at 8:41 PM
Anil, I enjoy your poem. Each one of us are like a "Spoke in God's Wheel". We all become "One". Blessing ~ Debra
George Avatar
February 6, 2022 at 8:28 PM
When 'I' becomes 'We' and when 'one' becomes 'all'- there is a mighty difference and narrow boundaries crumple down... Lofty thoughts !
Eslinger Avatar
February 6, 2022 at 10:06 AM
Yes! This is the very truth at the center of poetry! The truth we must keep seeing everywhere out there and within? Witty acrostic. Concise. Distinctive. Truth pulled up from the wel…quenching!!!
Deo Avatar
February 6, 2022 at 4:51 PM
Sally, one dreams of suchvresponses to ones writing as U offer me here. I do not take your visit lightly ( Michelle Faulkner thinks highly of your own work; so glad for mutual encouragement). Write on! And Peace as in shalom shalom
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