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Usone Presence

O occasionally human BE-ings get more than N nature's gifts, even our thinking skills E everyone melts into one: UsOne Presence

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Anil Deo

Date: 2/8/2022 12:46:00 PM

I am so thankful to you all for reading, and for Spirit-Communion in Jesus's shalom and Kingdom

Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/8/2022 6:41:00 AM

Hello Anil - Hi. May we all become one with thinking seeing hearing all of it. May our opinions never divide us but I know it does can can but may we get past the negative and turn to the larger picture of unity and oneness. Through brevity you speak volumes. May this day find you well and safe now and always. How is everything going for you and those around you. (yes I know that may be an unfair question of course I do because for those who we have shelter water food and warmth we have everything...) Love and Blessings always. Shalom and Namaste always as well...Remain safe Anil.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/7/2022 6:59:00 PM

Thinking skills do divide us? being born on the other side of the fence. Anil, and now i can see/feel both side hopefully becoming as one. One day?

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/7/2022 10:48:00 AM

Absolutely! Unity our Divine state -- Division, the human inclination. Well said. Joe.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/7/2022 3:29:00 AM

Yes Nostradamus used to talk about the time belt of knowledge, we pluck the info from its place of origin, nicely penned dear poet.

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/6/2022 8:41:00 PM

Anil, I enjoy your poem. Each one of us are like a "Spoke in God's Wheel". We all become "One". Blessing ~ Debra

Valsa George

Date: 2/6/2022 8:28:00 PM

When 'I' becomes 'We' and when 'one' becomes 'all'- there is a mighty difference and narrow boundaries crumple down... Lofty thoughts !

Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/6/2022 10:06:00 AM

Yes! This is the very truth at the center of poetry! The truth we must keep seeing everywhere out there and within? Witty acrostic. Concise. Distinctive. Truth pulled up from the wel…quenching!!!

Anil Deo
Date: 2/6/2022 4:51:00 PM

Sally, one dreams of suchvresponses to ones writing as U offer me here. I do not take your visit lightly ( Michelle Faulkner thinks highly of your own work; so glad for mutual encouragement). Write on! And Peace as in shalom shalom