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Upon the Day - a Summer Dream

Pure love    drowning in a garden of refrain raging winds    pulsing pushing out the drenching rain A song of songs    awaits as nerves climb the hill tops high a final breath    as sunlight falls upon the azure sky My lovely rose of silken light in silent steps    I plea in murmurous breath    I strain to recite a heartfelt love to thee If in this moment this summer day a love could be fulfilled then surely my sweet Desiree death would not prevail 6-18-13

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Date: 6/23/2013 12:38:00 PM
Beautiful-love is in the air. Thank you for my placement on your contest. I have not entered a contest for a while. Nice to always get a surprise. Have a great day. love phyl
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Date: 6/22/2013 12:23:00 PM
Flowing...flowing and melodic. How beautiful....
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Date: 6/21/2013 7:45:00 PM
this is really dreamy, and you made it so sublime.
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Date: 6/20/2013 7:25:00 PM
This poem is so beautiful, loved it and I also want to thank you for my placement in your contest Old 10th place poems, I am so honoured. Constance
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Date: 6/20/2013 6:57:00 PM
A nice light love poem! Light & love
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Date: 6/18/2013 9:15:00 PM
Very pretty..like the layout too...BG
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