Untitled

Life is a hand raised in question groping at times (unawares) brushing always hoping with fingers counting ways pointing lines into space inevitably and unalterably bent into corners

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Skat A

Date: 3/10/2010 5:12:00 PM

I also think you are a poet with no tittle . I mean it in a good way, I found your wors intresting.( S.k.a.t. )Is MY fun way of describing MY form of writting..Silly-Kitty-Attitude-Toytry-poetry..I do enjoy poetry. In Texas not to many people like poetry. Also People my age Do not like poetry. Not where I am from. My friends & family always call me SKAT...So I use it for MY sign off...Enjoyed reading...

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/15/2010 7:21:00 PM

Cool, Daver. I like it.-Robert

Constance La France

Date: 12/25/2009 7:24:00 PM

I feel like my life is like this.. groping.. into space.. always hoping... I love the picture you paint with words.. thanks so much for your comment on my poem, every once in awhile...

Sara Lokken

Date: 12/23/2009 1:01:00 PM

Wow, this one makes my head spin. The "feeling" in Winter's Martyr that you described is very right. Rain lept out into the freezing cold to change someone's darkness into snow-whiteness...but was very hurt in the process. I loved this one of yours, Daver. Best wishes, Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 12/2/2009 10:55:00 AM

This is a motion poem Sir,...I love it !!! Into mine favz it goes !!!! james

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/28/2009 6:56:00 AM

love the reach ..... into space! Jimbo

Elaine George

Date: 11/26/2009 11:47:00 PM

Now! you've gotting thinking. This is one to ponder for awhile. Thank you for the stimulation, Dave. Love, Lainie

Corinne Curcio

Date: 11/24/2009 10:07:00 AM

I like this Daver. You're one of the more innovative writers on the board. Bravo, Mr Austin

Date: 11/23/2009 12:12:00 PM

Wow! This is so insightful, leaving the reader with much to ponder about. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Karen

Tobey Hill

Date: 11/23/2009 7:45:00 AM

well done....That big hand of life raised in question..I like..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/22/2009 10:43:00 AM

A great perspective on the complexities of life, Daver. In this case, I think "Untitled" is an appropriate title because we don't know where the counting, pointing, groping and hoping will lead us. Big questions marks in the outcome! Awesome work, my friend. You always make me think in broader terms. Love you, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2009 7:17:00 AM

Interesting thoughts put to pen for I could go several ways with this write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara