'unmoving'

Your shoulders are broad and strong, 
Like you’ve been carrying boxes of experience, 
Like you should have known better. 

You block my way and–A signal 
for me to move–you shrug 
Shoulders lifting half an inch 
To that pinpoint of a moment 
When your voice echoes in my mind, 
So familiar like so many others, 
“Step aside, woman, this is how the world works.” 

The safety of obedience is enticing. 
I could move for you, I thought. 
I could choose to do that. 
So easy. One step to the right. So easy. 

But she–has already moved for you. 
A woman–has had to move her body 
To make space for you in the warmth of her womb, 
Your mother, built space 
Within her, stretching, contracting, expanding, 
Exhausting the air from her lungs so you could 
fill yours. 

So much has already been moved for you. 
How dare you ask for more space? 
How dare you ask more of any woman? 

As I stand here, unmoving, 
What do you see? 
I have been called a muse, an angel, 
The rising sun, a delicate flower, the summer 
breeze; 
I am a never-ending source of metaphor. 

But what do you see? 
Do you see an aggressive stereotype of a 
feminist? 
Do you see a stubborn little girl? 
Do you see an inferior creature meant only to submit? 

Will you ever see a warrior– 
Who deals in blood, 
And bleeds an ocean– 
Grotesque and beautiful? 
I have no armour. 
I do not need an armour. 
I barely scream at the pain of broken bones 
As I push another you into the world. 
I am–a woman. 
And as that, I will stand still.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Tonka Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Beautiful write. Daring and powerful... I raise my hat in salutation.
Kimathi Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 6:39 AM
Greetings P.I. Congrats for having your work featured in the Poetry Soup home page!!! ;-)
A  Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 9:12 PM
P.I., Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**
Alltraine Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 2:41 PM
Thank you! How exciting. :)
Roper Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 1:21 PM
Wow, a lot of emotion and power good write. Hugs Eve
Alltraine Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 6:12 PM
Thank you Eve. xxx
La France Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 7:55 AM
PI, this is an outstanding write, beautiful, powerful and full of your strength, I love the line, "I am a never-ending source of metaphor" so well done , A7, and thanks for visiting my poem, 53 Bronze Bells
Alltraine Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 6:12 PM
Thank you so much for your kindness. :) I love you poems, by the way. I'm definitely a fan. :) xxx
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July 30, 2015 at 1:39 PM
as a God Fearing man....I am woman's biggest fan....the first woman I ever Loved is the strongest person I know....and because of her, my Love of woman can only grow....I Love this....;)
Alltraine Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 3:24 PM
We need more men like you in this world Eric! :)
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July 29, 2015 at 3:24 AM
I'm a spoken word poet, so my poems are written with rhythm, to be performed. The performance of 'Unmoving' is up on youtube. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C2q4JxaN1fw
A  Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 8:33 PM
PI., Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Alltraine Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 3:07 AM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome Skat. Just a couple of bits about me... I live in England, born in the Philippines. :) I have a novel (called 'Heartbound') to be released on 5th August, but my first love is poetry. :) I'm looking forward to getting to know you and your poetry. :)
A   Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 1:32 PM
P.I.A,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Alltraine Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 3:12 AM
Hi Linda, thank you for the warm welcome. I agree. I've only been on the site a day and I've already met some friendly poets! I really like the feel of this community—happy to be here. :) Looking forward to reading some of your poems and getting to know you. :) xxx
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