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June.26.2023

Poop Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Jan Ellison

He ate a bowl of spicy soup Though hot, he had it in large scoop He felt his bowels growl He started farting foul Before he knew, came out the poop

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/15/2023 1:13:00 PM

Eww! Good one Valsa! Congrats! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2023 10:58:00 PM

Back with my congrats, Valsa

Jan Allison

Date: 7/4/2023 4:39:00 PM

yeuk and double yeuk lol so gross, so funny Valsa:-) Thanks so much for supporting the contest and many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Valsa George
Date: 7/4/2023 9:10:00 PM

Thanks a lot Jan for this funny contest and giving us the opportunity to go on chuckling :)

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/4/2023 4:31:00 PM

Congratulations Valsa!

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/3/2023 4:04:00 PM

Fuchi PU! lol hope you weren't anywhere near him. good one!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/1/2023 8:07:00 AM

I had seen a number of these Limericks with the same theme and was wondering what was going on then I saw it is a contest. Yours reads like good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and dropping by my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2023 1:08:00 PM

hahaha. I bet Jan will love this one when she judges her contest

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/26/2023 5:34:00 AM

Thank God! Good gosh. A helpful evacuation. A gas to read:) Fun poem.

Valsa George
Date: 6/26/2023 6:00:00 AM

Hi Joe, Glad to see you after a long gap ! Hope you are fine.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/25/2023 10:40:00 AM

A creative/fun ~ write/picture. Good Luck. I also did this one. Have a great day/week............

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/25/2023 3:57:00 AM

The masterfully composed limerick, Valsa, evokes a sense of sympathy for the protagonist's plight, as he endures the discomfort of indulging in piquant cuisine. Such an amusing yet undeniably mortifying predicament befalls the hapless individual.