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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Snow is still falling as I enter the wooded trails. The newly clothed trees rise as white fairytale beings in the wintry landscape. The snow dances in the light, a choreographed ballet conducted by the gentle wind. I’m happy walking in the snow and watching the feathered crystals tumble to the ground. Their chaotic flight forms a white blanket so uniformly, so orderly. I wait for their destination to come to my hand, to alight upon my ungloved fingers letting my warmth be their spring melt. silent snowflakes fall frosty air numbs my still soul winter’s calm embrace snowflakes dance and twirl winter’s chill upon my skin nature’s icy world

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Bill Baker

Date: 1/11/2024 5:44:00 PM

That's my poetess, Sara. Lovely Haibun. Bill

Paige Hind

Date: 1/9/2024 2:20:00 PM

Very lovely, I was enchanted...

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/9/2024 5:14:00 PM

thank you, Paige. Appreciate you and your visits. Have a lovely evening, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/8/2024 6:04:00 PM

snow can be so beautiful if we know how to appreciate it, love all your great poems !

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/9/2024 4:56:00 AM

thank you, Rose. You're so kind and generous with your complimentary words. I appreciate you...hugs for today, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/8/2024 12:58:00 PM

Thanks for this poem. The snow deserves recognition because it's also tomorrow's water.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/8/2024 4:58:00 PM

great perspective, Hilda. Thank you for that and thank you for stopping by. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/8/2024 12:49:00 PM

- Cold fingers, chin and cheeks ... every day on my trip ... the winter wind bites the skin - Beautiful poem, Sara ... but, I'm already dreaming of spring :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/8/2024 4:59:00 PM

thanks for your visit, Anne-Lise. I too am ready for spring and some days with sunshine...I don't handle continuous gloomy days...hugs, Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/8/2024 12:22:00 PM

Very lovely and delightful Haibun! A favorite poem, have a nice time ~AA

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/8/2024 4:59:00 PM

thank you AA for your visit and for the fave. Have a great evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 1/8/2024 11:38:00 AM

Your poem skilfully combines vivid imagery, sensory details, and concise haikus to convey the beauty and tranquillity of a snowy woodland scene. The reader is invited to immerse themselves in the magic of winter and appreciate the delicate dance of nature's elements... Another excellent haibun dear..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/8/2024 5:00:00 PM

thank you, Silent One! I appreciate your observations, your kind words, and your insights. I always welcome your visits. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/8/2024 9:48:00 AM

Your exquisite and unparalleled depiction of nature in your artwork is truly captivating dear Sara. The tranquility and ingenuity displayed within it is commendable. Your audacity to venture into the midst of snowfall and produce such a creative masterpiece is truly remarkable.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/8/2024 5:05:00 PM

thanks for your visit, dear Sotto, and for your comments. For the record, I do love venturing out in the snow. I enjoy standing in our yard watching the flakes drift down from the sky...I feel as if I'm witnessing a miracle of sorts. My neighbors think I'm certifiably nuts for doing so. Ha! Have a great evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/8/2024 8:13:00 AM

Whoa!!! You are brave to go out in falling snow. Very creative work you have penned. Thanks for sharing . Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/8/2024 5:03:00 PM

I love standing outside and watching the snow...it's mesmerizing. Thanks for your visit and comments. Have a pleasant evening, Sara B

Karen Jones

Date: 1/8/2024 7:38:00 AM

Lovely as usual:0) thanks for sharing your wonderful poetry and cheerful supportive energy on the soup by reading so many poems Sara! Hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/8/2024 5:03:00 PM

thank you, Karen...and thanks for noticing my supportive energy. Grateful for your support as well. Have a great evening, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/8/2024 6:12:00 AM

Simply beautiful! As lovely as the falling snow--joyous in its realms!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/8/2024 5:02:00 PM

awww, thank you Vijay!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/8/2024 5:45:00 AM

Oh wow, what a breathtaking haibun this is, dear Sara! I'm loving the wintry ambience that you've so gorgeously painted with creamy colours and especially that imagery of feeling the softness yet freezing essence of snow, as it melts with a gentle tickle, exchanging warmth.. Ahh, that got me mesmerised and enchanted!! Especially, the numbing texture that you've described in your haiku, yess, it touches our soul with its unique stillness.. I've never felt it in my life, but I somehow can connect.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/8/2024 5:02:00 PM

thanks for your enchanting and encouraging words, Hiya. You've reflected back the sumptuous nature of winter....I like it because of the stillness and calm...I hope one day you, too, get to experience snow...watching it fall seems magical. I appreciate your visits and mindful comments. have a splendid evening, Sara

Hiya Sharma
Date: 1/8/2024 5:47:00 AM

Your words make me feel the beauty of snow, even when I've never actually seen it.. I do wish to atleast take a glimpse of those "snowflakes" that "dance and twirl".. Enjoyed reading this, as always, beautiful poetess.. Sending you love & light ~ :)

Joseph May

Date: 1/8/2024 5:10:00 AM

I love how you describe the "newly clothed" trees" and the ballet of the snow, I enjoyed this beautiful write

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/8/2024 5:13:00 AM

thank you for your visit and kind words. Grateful you enjoyed my poem. Have a splendid day, Sara