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I sob and kneel beside the open grave, relieved that no one's here to see. Recalling all the happiness she gave, I hope her spirit is now free, and sadly wonder what is wrong with me - my friend, my lover and my wife is dead and wickedly, I took her life. She died asleep upon our bed. Why did I stab her with this bloody knife? But then she stirs and lifts her head... written 7th May for Dear Heart Constance's Dizain contest

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Date: 5/22/2020 7:27:00 AM
Jack, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest_Constance
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Date: 5/20/2020 12:00:00 AM
I would be afraid if my husband dreamed he killed me. I would stop sleeping with him for sure. I loved your dark take on the contest Jack and it landed you in First Place with your surprise ending! Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 5/19/2020 11:38:00 PM
Oh this is thrilling with a twisted end. Congratulations Jack :)
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Date: 5/19/2020 2:21:00 PM
ooh what chilling imagery Jack you are a great story teller love the ending of the poem:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/8/2020 9:38:00 PM
oooh, love the ending!!!
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Date: 5/7/2020 5:54:00 PM
You've been watching too many murder documentaries. Enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 5/7/2020 5:01:00 PM
How magnificently morbid - there's something about dark poetry that fascinates me...
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Date: 5/7/2020 3:37:00 PM
Wow this is a grim one. I haven't seen her contest. I think its a winner. Thanks for your remarks about my Farmer Joe. He was a great man. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/7/2020 3:14:00 PM
Certainly dark and chilly, Jack! One that Constance would love! Regards // paul
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Date: 5/7/2020 2:25:00 PM
Wow! Well-written shocker, Jack. Janice
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