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Two Flakes

Husband says, “Look! Snow!” I see it splash on windshield - Two flakes peak and then they split. Warm hearts in the car So excited; in the cold Scintillating snow 1/13/2023 Bite Size Contest no59 Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/18/2023 2:28:00 AM

I can feel the excitement!

Valsa George

Date: 1/17/2023 8:39:00 AM

Hi Kim, I can feel your excitement on seeing snow flakes falling. Lovely Sedoka. We live in a place where there is no snow. My experience of watching snow is so negligible. I write on winter based on what I have seen from pictures and what I read.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 11:27:00 AM

Oh but you must experience a great snow storm! The land and air so fresh. I call it virgin snow. You can mold it unless it is powdery, some people make snow cream. And of course the obvious - snowmen, accept ahem (again) powder. LOL! I sense you are smiling…hope so!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/15/2023 3:23:00 PM

Hello Kim, I only like the first snowfall. I enjoy to watch the snow fall to the ground spreading slowly. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/16/2023 11:05:00 AM

Hello Kim, yes it is. Watching the snowfall gently to the ground is soothing Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2023 4:13:00 PM

The first snowfall is the best! Thanks, Darlene! Hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2023 4:53:00 AM

I never fail to get excited when snow falls, where snow is concerned I've never grown up lol. Enjoy your weekend Kim. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2023 7:58:00 AM

Me too! Thanks, Tom! Have a happy weekend too. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/13/2023 11:03:00 PM

Never been in the snow but had a dose of sleet whilst staying in London. Had to enter a restaurant and eat even though it was early for me to eat.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2023 8:00:00 AM

Oh sleet is nowhere the same! Snow is fresh and almost like a fairytale when it first falls… ((hugs))

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/13/2023 7:54:00 PM

My hubby gets excited for snow too, this made me smile :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2023 8:22:00 PM

Thanks! Smiling back at you :)