Home » Poems » Chris Green » Twilight Dreaming

Twilight Dreaming

Twilight Dreaming Serene this eve of moonlit glow neath star shine twinkled fall Cicada song on whispers flow in symphonies a’ call I feel the earth beneath my hand, a drifting nocturne breeze On river fern and willow’s stand, past shadowed twilight trees Yet all I see this wondrous place, amidst of nature posed The beauty of your perfect face within my eyes now closed Good night Soupers

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/14/2017 2:28:00 AM

Awesome write :) 7

Chris Green
Date: 5/15/2017 8:38:00 AM

Thank you so very much Debbie

Eye Truth-Teller

Date: 5/5/2017 9:52:00 AM

great natural poem

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 10:29:00 AM

Thanks so much

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/5/2017 9:12:00 AM

-- smile silly Chris --

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 10:30:00 AM

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/5/2017 5:06:00 AM

Morning Chris. So gentle and tranquil. It makes me want to have classical music playing in the background or having a lullaby as well. And yes another would be "close to you" by the carpenters. Take your pick. In any event your entry is lovely poetry and soothing thought. Well done entirely.

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 9:08:00 AM

I'll take the classical music my friend. Thank you Lisa, you have no idea how the kindness you show me always touches my heart.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/5/2017 4:54:00 AM

An awesome vision before you go to sleep. Love it Chris thanks for sharing a big 7 - I'm adding it to my Fav ...Maria

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 9:07:00 AM

Aw, thank you Maria. That is so kind of you. I am excited you liked this one.

Darren White

Date: 5/5/2017 3:39:00 AM

Sleep well and sweet dreams my friend. I hope you dream of her as beautiful as you have written this poem :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 9:07:00 AM

Thanks so much Darren. I hope you have a great night too.

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/4/2017 9:58:00 PM

Love and Nature, two of the best things in life. Very sweet twilight dream Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 9:06:00 AM

Yep, you are so right my friend. Thank you Lenna for being so nice to me.

White Wolf

Date: 5/4/2017 9:52:00 PM

Lovely imagery in this, Chris! A perfect poem to read this day! Love your style! Sleep well!

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 9:06:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend for always leaving such encouraging thoughts for me.

Sara Ella

Date: 5/4/2017 9:11:00 PM

The river with all it's scenic beauty which you have painted here <3 Love this Chris <3

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 9:05:00 AM

Thank you so very much Sara. I am happy you enjoyed your visit to my poetry.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/4/2017 8:14:00 PM

Your poetry always leaves me dreaming Chris. Especially at twilight, my favorite time of day and night! A lovely poem to dream upon! Thank you my friend. 7 ; )

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 9:05:00 AM

Thank you Connie, I am with you, twilight is the best part of the day. I am thrilled you enjoyed this and more than thrilled at all of the kind thoughts you send my way.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/4/2017 6:58:00 PM

This is unusually touching to me. Sweet dreams, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 9:04:00 AM

Hi there my friend, I am happy it was. I appreciate your visit and kind thoughts Sunlite.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2017 6:51:00 PM

so beautiful and romantic my friend:-) sleep tight and sweet dreams:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 9:04:00 AM

Thank you Jan, your kind comments are the stuff dreams are made of.

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/4/2017 6:37:00 PM

A perfect twilight feel. Good night Chris and dream of one for tomorrow morning... Hugs :) Kina

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 9:02:00 AM

Hi there again my friend. Thank you for stopping by my good night poem. May all of your dreams be beautiful Kina.