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Fragile flakes weave a blanket of soft snow covering Autumn's leaves with Winter's white. And blustery breezes begin to blow as a sullied sun disappears from sight; and day can no longer hold back the night. Winter wails amidst a flurry of flakes; with Her crystal aura composed of ice. And She begins to freeze rivers and lakes; holding life ransom, in cold's crushing vise, preparing for Spring's warmth to meet Her price. Fall colors get whitewashed across the land, as Autumn's buried beneath drifts of snow. And the naked trees stripped of their leaves stand barren, rooted to where nothing can grow; although it used to, not that long ago. A cold chill rides atop a frigid breeze, and the songbirds have long since flown away. While the temperature drops by degrees till it is too cold to go out to play; and the children are stuck indoors all day.

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Date: 12/4/2022 2:29:00 AM
Wonderful poem and example for your contest, Emile. Love it. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 12/4/2022 8:06:00 AM
Thanks, Regina, as always, I appreciate your comments, Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/30/2022 9:16:00 PM
A nice, winter poem, Emile:)
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Date: 12/1/2022 6:46:00 AM
Thanks, Jo, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/20/2022 11:25:00 AM
Wonderfully exposed are your wintry verses. Congratulations on your win, Emile..
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Date: 1/20/2022 11:37:00 AM
Thanks, Jenna, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/20/2022 7:29:00 AM
your imagery is always exquisite Emile, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:52:00 AM
Thanks, Jan, I appreciate all of your comments my friend, Emile
Date: 1/20/2022 4:31:00 AM
Emile congratulations on your win! Your poem, reeled in me, like a movie as the seasons moved in slow motion, each detail expressed with such grace. KUDOS! :)Paulette
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:50:00 AM
Thanks, Paulette, always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/20/2022 2:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Emile, your wonderful imagery left me feeling winter’s chill. John
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:49:00 AM
Thanks, John, I always appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/19/2022 9:28:00 PM
Exquisite imagery in this winter poem Emile. Congratulations on your trophy win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:48:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/19/2022 8:34:00 PM
Very attractive title. Tumbling Flakes. The whole poem is beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/19/2022 8:43:00 PM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, they brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/19/2022 8:25:00 PM
Back to say "Congratulations" on your top spot in Francine's contest!
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Date: 1/19/2022 8:42:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/19/2022 8:02:00 PM
congrats on your win in my contest , you had a lot of great competition but tied for the top spot
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:46:00 AM
Thanks, Francine, I appreciate the placement, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/19/2022 7:14:00 PM
Lovely! Congratulations, Emile!
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Date: 1/19/2022 8:41:00 PM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/19/2022 6:51:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually experience wintry delight in my "winterless" country... though it's cold in our place now. God bless you.
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Date: 1/19/2022 8:41:00 PM
Thanks, Beata, that's quite the compliment, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/19/2022 6:42:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Emile. Congrats.
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Date: 1/19/2022 8:39:00 PM
Thanks, Reason, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/31/2021 11:08:00 AM
Brrr. You describe Winter beautifully. Congratulation on your win~
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Date: 12/31/2021 1:25:00 PM
Thanks, Ann, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/30/2021 1:51:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Emile:-) Stellar poem with great imagery!
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Date: 12/30/2021 8:06:00 PM
Thanks, Edward, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Happy New Year, Emile.
Date: 12/30/2021 9:38:00 AM
Emile, congratulations and high fives for this lovely description of winter - even when it is too cold for the kids to go out and play. So many wonderful images my friend! Sending you warm wishes and joy for your new year!
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Date: 12/30/2021 1:32:00 PM
Thanks, Sam, as always you bring a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/12/2021 1:16:00 PM
Hello Emile, yes when it is too cold outside the children will not play. Just stay indoors to keep warm. enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 12/13/2021 11:48:00 AM
Hello Emile, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/13/2021 7:04:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/12/2021 11:24:00 AM
Emile, I love your images! Fantastic! I particularly liked the idea of winter whitewashing away the color. Such fine writing, my friend.
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Date: 12/12/2021 12:24:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, you know how much I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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