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Where Fragrant Flowers Bend

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To find love where a fragrant flower bends And watch the morning sun caress her face Bathed in amber light her beauty transcends My love begins to occupy its space To wake in quiet voice this tender realm In gentle fashion time, she will erase I'll feel her lips so warm they overwhelm And steals my soul to keep in sweet embrace We'll feel each rush of flames that never burn When lovers free passion's warmth to explore And dance in lover's shoes, to always yearn To feel the bonding kiss forevermore To see her form, where fragrant flowers bend To her, I'll give my love until the end 6/22/17

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Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 8/26/2017 9:30:00 PM

A lovely sensual song wrapped in the sonnet's elegant form. It emerges as if uncovered rather than created. Congratulations.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 7/29/2017 5:22:00 PM

What a feast for the senses, Frederic, so exquisitely written and presented ... love this! Congrats, My Friend!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/28/2017 4:48:00 AM

The combination of your ink, pic and the music is all justice to our artistic tastes! Congrats Frederic, for your top placement in the contest! ;-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/27/2017 10:53:00 PM

I love this sonnet and the music enhances your romantic words Frederic. Congratulations on wonderful placement my friend! Beautiful! : )

Lin Lane

Date: 7/27/2017 9:59:00 AM

Your sonnets are always presented with the scent, vision, and sounds of romance. Congratulations on this winning one, Frederic.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 7/27/2017 9:58:00 AM

It's like a romantic song. Love the rhythm in it. Congrats on your win.

John Hamilton

Date: 7/27/2017 9:17:00 AM

You continue to amaze me Frederick, your writing always draws me in, this was no exception, I thought it might be you, but I judge blind. You really seem to know what I like, you always show up in the winners circle, congrats on another fine win!

Frederic Parker
Date: 7/27/2017 10:01:00 AM

thank you, John for the kindness

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/4/2017 9:47:00 AM

A soft sweet romantic sonnet, Frederic:)

Alyssa Lorette

Date: 6/28/2017 8:18:00 PM

Amazing sonnet Frederic! Good luck in the contest! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2017 9:19:00 PM

Frederic, what was the piece of music that inspired this? I just came back to say thanks for the comment on my Landscape poem .The boat indeed would enhance the scene. Waiting for you to put up a new poem!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/25/2017 2:42:00 PM

ohh, spellbound by the sweet thrill of your fondled words... sigh and wow, frederick!..huggs

Eve Roper

Date: 6/24/2017 4:12:00 PM

amazing and so very romantic, Frederic ~*

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/24/2017 2:19:00 PM

This is an outstanding poem Frederic. A soft beautiful write filled with so much love and peace. Very nice ! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2017 8:29:00 PM

You did a really great job here, Frederic. a very passion filled entry!

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/22/2017 6:23:00 PM

Wow Frederic. So much passion from a country boy. Very impressive. Wonderful sonnet, my friend:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/22/2017 1:33:00 PM

- Romantic and beautiful, Frederic - It stole my heart :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/22/2017 1:03:00 PM

Oh this is so beautiful and romantic Frederic you really are and excellent sonneteer. I may give the contest a go but I do struggle with this form:-) good luck with this delightful poem:-) hugs jan xx

Frederic Parker
Date: 6/22/2017 1:09:00 PM

Funny how that is I can't do limericks like you do Jan