Notes About The Poem

Where Fragrant Flowers Bend

V
To find love where a fragrant flower bends
And watch the morning sun caress her face
Bathed in amber light her beauty transcends
My love begins to occupy its space
To wake in quiet voice this tender realm
In gentle fashion time, she will erase
I'll feel her lips so warm they overwhelm
And steals my soul to keep in sweet embrace
We'll feel each rush of flames that never burn
When lovers free passion's warmth to explore
And dance in lover's shoes, to always yearn
To feel the bonding kiss forevermore

   To see her form, where fragrant flowers bend
   To her,  I'll give my love until the end


6/22/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/26/2017 9:30:00 PM
A lovely sensual song wrapped in the sonnet's elegant form. It emerges as if uncovered rather than created. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2017 5:22:00 PM
What a feast for the senses, Frederic, so exquisitely written and presented ... love this! Congrats, My Friend!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/28/2017 4:48:00 AM
The combination of your ink, pic and the music is all justice to our artistic tastes! Congrats Frederic, for your top placement in the contest! ;-)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/27/2017 10:53:00 PM
I love this sonnet and the music enhances your romantic words Frederic. Congratulations on wonderful placement my friend! Beautiful! : )
Login to Reply
Date: 7/27/2017 9:59:00 AM
Your sonnets are always presented with the scent, vision, and sounds of romance. Congratulations on this winning one, Frederic.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/27/2017 9:58:00 AM
It's like a romantic song. Love the rhythm in it. Congrats on your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/27/2017 9:17:00 AM
You continue to amaze me Frederick, your writing always draws me in, this was no exception, I thought it might be you, but I judge blind. You really seem to know what I like, you always show up in the winners circle, congrats on another fine win!
Login to Reply
Parker Avatar
Frederic Parker
Date: 7/27/2017 10:01:00 AM
thank you, John for the kindness
Date: 7/4/2017 9:47:00 AM
A soft sweet romantic sonnet, Frederic:)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2017 8:18:00 PM
Amazing sonnet Frederic! Good luck in the contest! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/26/2017 9:19:00 PM
Frederic, what was the piece of music that inspired this? I just came back to say thanks for the comment on my Landscape poem .The boat indeed would enhance the scene. Waiting for you to put up a new poem!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/25/2017 2:42:00 PM
ohh, spellbound by the sweet thrill of your fondled words... sigh and wow, frederick!..huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2017 4:12:00 PM
amazing and so very romantic, Frederic ~*
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2017 2:19:00 PM
This is an outstanding poem Frederic. A soft beautiful write filled with so much love and peace. Very nice ! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2017 8:29:00 PM
You did a really great job here, Frederic. a very passion filled entry!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2017 6:23:00 PM
Wow Frederic. So much passion from a country boy. Very impressive. Wonderful sonnet, my friend:)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2017 1:33:00 PM
- Romantic and beautiful, Frederic - It stole my heart :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2017 1:03:00 PM
Oh this is so beautiful and romantic Frederic you really are and excellent sonneteer. I may give the contest a go but I do struggle with this form:-) good luck with this delightful poem:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Parker Avatar
Frederic Parker
Date: 6/22/2017 1:09:00 PM
Funny how that is I can't do limericks like you do Jan
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter