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True Miracle (Septet)

Precious child You have changed the world You’ve given us forgiveness And gave chances for true salvation Child of the world, crying not, May we learn from you And your love Septet syllable count is 3,5,7,9,7,5,3, unrhymed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/16/2009 1:33:00 PM
Eloquent simplicity just as the message. Michael this is beautiful. Laurie
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Date: 1/16/2009 12:13:00 PM
Wow! What an uplifting poem. Creative use of this challenging form. Love the title. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poetry. Keep up the good writing! Have a nice day. Karen
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Date: 1/16/2009 11:03:00 AM
masterfully done....wonderful piece! learn something all the time here...:)
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Date: 1/16/2009 9:03:00 AM
PERFECTLY BEAUTIFUL! Michael. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/16/2009 8:38:00 AM
Beautifully written....very moving, and simply inspiring. ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/16/2009 8:13:00 AM
What an uplifting poem. It fills my heart with joy to read it. Forgiveness and salvation. Truly they are beautiful gifts. May peace and love follow you always. GBY. Love, Robin
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