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Etheree
the Etheree, consists of ten lines of unmetered and unrhymed verse, the first line having one syllable, each succeeding line adding a syllable, with the total syllable count being fifty-five.

"In all things of nature there is something of the marvelous." Aristole An azure blue sky is colored pink by cotton candy clouds clustering near its edge as though tethered to the sun while darkness unveils timid stars that twinkle like trillions of diamonds and moonbeams gild waters with liquid gold. (Etheree) 05/20/20 Etheree Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Constance La France

Date: 5/28/2020 10:32:00 AM

Emile, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/28/2020 5:01:00 PM

Thanks Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/25/2020 2:13:00 PM

a gem of a poem Emile, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/25/2020 5:06:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/25/2020 1:38:00 PM

Wow Emile! This is such a beautiful dusk I pictured through your words. "Moonbeams girl waters with liquid gold"...love the exemplary imagery. Congratulations on your win :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/25/2020 1:57:00 PM

Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/25/2020 10:27:00 AM

Splendid imagery.. Great write Emile.. Congrats...

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/25/2020 1:56:00 PM

Thanks Jenish, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

John Watt

Date: 5/24/2020 8:21:00 PM

Emile, your Etheree forms a very satisfying perfect triangle that pleases the eye. I can only assume that was achieved with intentionality for I know how hard it is to do. But that is secondary to the effect of your beautiful description of twilight yielding to the celestial wonders of the night sky. Congratulations ~ John

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/24/2020 9:37:00 PM

Thank You John, you honor me my friend, Emile.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 5/24/2020 5:20:00 PM

Fantastic Emile. Congrats on your win.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/24/2020 9:35:00 PM

Thanks Jeanne, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/24/2020 4:38:00 PM

Nicely done,Emile, great imagery. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/24/2020 9:34:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

John Hardison

Date: 5/20/2020 8:36:00 PM

Very colorful and soothing poem. Best of luck in contest. Peace, Love and Joy. Always

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/21/2020 9:00:00 AM

Thanks John, I appreciate your comments my friend,Emile.

Anil Deo

Date: 5/20/2020 8:09:00 PM

Glad to read your work again, Emile. Bon Jour Monsieur. Love nature poems; "merci beaucoup" for inspiring me to try my hand at ETHEREE later ... shalom, shalom

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/21/2020 8:59:00 AM

Thanks so much Anil, your remarks have brought a smile to my day, stay safe my friend, Emile.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/20/2020 7:39:00 AM

Beautifully composed Emile, good luck in the contest. Tom

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/20/2020 12:02:00 PM

Thanks Tom, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.