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Thank yous are such tricky, delicate things, Like small birds with hollow bones Or the first breath of sharp air on a cold November morn. They tend to get away from us, To appear and disappear without our noticing. They are difficult to capture, unable to hold in the palm of our hand. A thank you. What is it? I ponder: Can we examine them and see them for what they truly are? Are they insincere and occasionally a burden, nothing more than a polite tit-for-tat transaction? Or are they sincere but easily forgotten and sometimes lost, some never having been spoken or shared? A thank you. What is it? Is it black and liquid, like a fresh mug of hot tea? Is it silvery and crinkled, like discarded wrapping paper? Or is each one unique, like an inside joke between two old friends? A thank you. What is it? I do not always know what a true thank you looks or feels like. Perhaps the appearance depends upon the giver and the receiver. Maybe it’s the intention in the exchange that colors its appearance. A thank you. What is it? I conclude: It’s a heartfelt exchange between two people. I’m giving you one now. Thanks for reading my poem.

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Date: 9/3/2023 6:32:00 AM
Thank you, my friend. I love the way you wrote this gem. It is deep, and points to how we treat others. A thank you must be sincere or else it is worth nothing. Poetic pondering and a gift to we readers. A gem. A fine fav for me!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/4/2023 3:50:00 PM
thank you, Robert, for calling my poem a 'gem.' That means a great deal to me. Thank you. I appreciate your faving it as well. Have an enjoyable evening, Sara
Date: 8/30/2023 3:19:00 AM
Good Morning Sara. Hello. I turned to this entry because of your title. My family gave my late dad the name tricky. I very much liked your gracious thank you to your readers. And yes, you give thought to both sides of who is giving thanks and who is receiving thanks. This was creative Sara. Thank you for sharing (smile). Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings always (another smile)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/30/2023 3:53:00 AM
thanks for stopping by, Lisa. How interesting that the title piqued your interest. That was fun to know. I appreciate your kind comments. Have a wonderful day, Sara :-) smiles
Date: 8/28/2023 3:10:00 AM
Sometimes we write about what we see and sometimes we write about what we feel and you have combined both here for a philosophical introspective poem about perspective and how you feel and see things... Also admire the style in which your wrote your prose .. a deep and reflective poem.. you are a gifted poet.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/28/2023 4:45:00 PM
Wow! I am most appreciative of your comments, especially about being a gifted poet. I just recently began writing poetry and am still a bit uncertain and timid. So your comment made my day! Thank you for reading my poem and for your accolades. Enjoy you evening, Sara
Date: 8/27/2023 1:56:00 PM
You're welcome, Sara, and thanks you for sharing your thoughts on "thank yous" through your poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/27/2023 4:26:00 PM
Thank you for your thank you! ha, hugs, Sara
Date: 8/27/2023 5:03:00 AM
So unique and original a poem, Sara! Perhaps the appearance depends upon the giver and the receiver. Maybe it’s the intention in the exchange that colors its appearance... so well said. Much enjoyed your intelligent dialogue that made me pause and think. Thank you as well!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/27/2023 7:46:00 AM
Thanks for your well-penned comments and thoughts. I appreciate your participating in my inner, poetic dialogue :-) Have a great day!
Date: 8/26/2023 5:53:00 PM
Beautiful musings here, Sara ~ enjoyed
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/27/2023 3:52:00 AM
thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate you.
Date: 8/26/2023 8:32:00 AM
Greetings Sara, I enjoyed reading your piece on "thank you's." They do carry a myriad of shades. Your use of simile is top notch (thank you "like a fresh mug of hot tea.") I can relate. Best wishes as you pen fine work. Brian
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/26/2023 1:20:00 PM
Thank you, Brian, for your reading and commenting...and for appreciating the similes. I kind of struggled with this one a bit so your words are a welcome sight. Have a great day! Sara
Date: 8/25/2023 9:15:00 PM
Sara, Thank you for unravelling. -Richard
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/26/2023 3:55:00 AM
thanks for reading and responding. My unraveling was a bit disjointed...sigh. Enjoy your day, Sara

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